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ACK Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 02:57 PM
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Make a title for my poem!
Please suggest a title for my poem

Here is the poem:

Its a moment that
I hear myself dreaming
out loud again
I should stop that shit
because after all man
It don't mean
that I know nothing here
where the world
sleeps loud and snoring
drifting bits of
random meaning dragged
off by the scruff
of my own neck bleeding
little stings thin
pencil like cuts of my
own semblence of
what I want to think is
just another bit
of a harsh reality that
bitch slaps the
sense back into me and
I say now that
I have to stop that scheming
of the dreaming
out loud to myself again.
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XNASA Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:03 PM
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1. "Walk to Work"
Because that sounds like exactly the kinds of things going through my mind as I walk to work. 'Course once I've had my coffee, I'm a lot better.
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proud patriot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:48 PM
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7. I like that one XNASA
:thumbsup:
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Richardo Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:07 PM
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2. "Trees"
:spank:
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Village Idiot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:19 PM
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3. "Lick My Love Pump"
Spinal Tap's answer to the 'love ballad" genre.
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TheWizardOfMudd Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:22 PM
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4. "Conquering Illusions"
:)
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bigwillq Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:38 PM
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5. "Pounding back the Prozac"
BTW, I think your poem is very good. I like the part about the pencil cuts. I use to write a lot of poems and they were kinda of on the eclectic side like yours is (I hope you're not offended by that).
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cheezus Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 03:39 PM
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6. "Titled by DU"
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bigwillq Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-20-04 09:42 PM
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8. Kick
Let's be creative now. This is a cool poem.
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