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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 03:06 PM
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Anyone feeling creative? I need help with a starting sentence.
I have a paper due tonight and I need a starting sentence to get things flowing. I'm staring at my laptop with a dried up brain. I wouldn't use your exact sentence but it might help to stimulate my mind.

The paper is on death and the rituals surrounding it in Judaism, Islam, Buddhism, Hinduism (and maybe Christianity).

And p.s. if anyone is Hindu and knows the significance of tying thumbs together and big toes together I would appreciate it if you could let me know.

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azmouse Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 03:29 PM
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1. Maybe a quote from the Bible will help?
1 Corinthians 15:54-55:
54 So when this corruptible shall have put on incorruption, and this mortal shall have put on immortality, then shall be brought to pass the saying that is written, Death is swallowed up in victory.
55 O death, where is thy sting? O grave, where is thy victory?

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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 03:57 PM
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3. Thanks, you've got me thinking...my problem is that the
research I did is mostly technical and I need more spiritual.
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ohiosmith Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 03:30 PM
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2. "It was a dark and stormy night."
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 03:58 PM
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4. A great opening sentence....I think I heard it somewhere before.
:-)
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ET Awful Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:04 PM
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7. Damn. You beat me to it, I was gonna say that
:P
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Dora Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:01 PM
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5. bartleby.com is always good for quotation trawling
QUOTATION: Death, the most dreaded of all evils, is therefore of no concern to us; for while we exist death is not present, and when death is present we no longer exist.


ATTRIBUTION: Epicurus (c. 341–271 B.C.), Greek philosopher. letter, Menoeceus 125, Epicurus Letters, Principal Doctrines, and Vatican Sayings, trans. by Russel M. Geer, Bobbs-Merrill Co. (1964).

http://www.bartleby.com/66/77/21677.html
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:02 PM
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6. Ohhhh, I like that. Thanks. n/t
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billyskank Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:06 PM
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8. "The night was humid"
:thumbsup:
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skygazer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:28 PM
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18. Sultry
The night was sultry.

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ET Awful Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:06 PM
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9. I'm going to have to go with
Consider the lilies of the goddamn field. . . .
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ZombieNixon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:15 PM
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10. Start with an emotional uplift:
Edited on Tue Mar-28-06 04:16 PM by ZombieNixon
Death.


:P

Edit: since it's short, I'll give you a second sentence, as well:
Death. It will enslave us all.

Nice, happy stuff.

:bounce:
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neweurope Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:17 PM
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11. I used to be a journalist and know the problem well.
The solution usually was: Start ANYWHERE. Start writing, even if it's right in the middle. Then watch things click into place, and the grand opening usually comes last.

---------------

Remember Fallujah

Bush to The Hague!
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:22 PM
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15. I think that the idea is just not formed in my brain. But you're
right, I need to just write...I can tell this paper is going to be really lame:-(
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neweurope Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:34 PM
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19. That's what I and all my collegues often thought, and usually
it was an unneccessary fear :) When I REALLY had a problem, I went technical: I just listed my facts one after the other. Then I tried to bring them to an order that had a main fact up front and then the least important and I gradually build up from there to the most important facts. Then I tried to find good connections between those. And usually while I was doing this the idea for the beginning popped up. It will for you, I'm sure :)

So have courage and START.

-----------------

Remember Fallujah

Bush to The Hague!
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:55 PM
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21. You're right....off I go. Thanks. n/t
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:19 PM
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12. Here goes:
"It has not gone unnoticed that rituals associated with death and dying are among the most sacred and significant of all rites practiced by humankind."
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:25 PM
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17. Yes, I need to focus on the sacred. thanks n/t
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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 07:03 PM
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30. Sorry. Wordy.
"Rituals associated with death and dying are among the most sacred and significant of all rites practiced by humankind."

Also, a matter of opinion, in my opinion.
Birth, baptism, confirmation, coming of age, and marriage are at least of equal significance in many religious rites.
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TheBaldyMan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:20 PM
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13. Casper Weinberger is dead.
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DS1 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:20 PM
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14. Okay
Edited on Tue Mar-28-06 04:21 PM by DS1
It wasn't long after strapping myself into a Toyota Corolla sporting 500 pounds of fertilizer and diesel that I realized Buddhism was likely a less violent option, yet on the other hand, Guadalupe and I were on our way to blow up the local fat man statue and hopefully several of his toga-befrocked henchmen.

( sorry, I was channelling Hunter Thompson for a moment )
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:23 PM
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16. OK, I'll try to put that in my own words..wouldn't want to
plagiarize:-)
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:52 PM
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20. When one is dead
things are a lot different. For example it might come to pass that your big toes are tied together. But you will not mind at all as you cannot walk anyway.

180
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 04:56 PM
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22. Lovely. That brought a smile. Thanks. n/t
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 05:17 PM
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26. You are welcome
Smiles are necessary from time to replace the worry wrinkles.

BOTOH What I say is very true.

Isn't it true that Oedipus (The Grecian tragedy guy) had his feet tied together and left for dead as a child?

180 hahahahaha
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northzax Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 05:06 PM
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23. some options
1: This breaking news just in, Generalissimo Francisco Franco is still dead. -Chevy Chase

2: (one I've actually used, no less) So, I'm fucking this chick, and all of a sudden I think...

3: 'To the well organized mind, death is but the next great adventure' Albus Dumbledore

4: 'our lives are made by the deaths of others' -leonardo da vinci

5: 'The worms go in, the worms go out, the worms play piccolo on your snout'
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Texaroo Donating Member (155 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 05:24 PM
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27. "Bring out your dead."
The Monty Python take.

"It has ceased to be. It is no more. If you hadn't nailed it to the perch, it would be pushing up the daisies. It has gone to meet its Maker. This is an EX-parrot!!!"

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northzax Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 05:37 PM
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28. i' m not dead yet!
I'm getting better!
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NNadir Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 05:10 PM
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24. Here's a stab:
"What we love, most of us learn, is more than flesh."
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NNadir Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 05:12 PM
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25. Here's my suggestion.
"What we love, most of us learn, is more than flesh."
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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 06:58 PM
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29. "Christians eat their dead."
At least ritualistically, as in the wafers and wine of their "communion".
"The body and blood of Christ".

There's your start.
The rest is up to you.
;-)
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trof Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 07:05 PM
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31. Due tonight? TONIGHT?
Rots a ruck.
:eyes:
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Catfight Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 07:07 PM
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32. "As I fixed my eyes on the powered pores of his cold dead hand...."
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EstimatedProphet Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 07:10 PM
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33. .
Edited on Tue Mar-28-06 07:11 PM by EstimatedProphet
"So I call up my preacher
I say: gimme strength for round 5
He said: you don’t need no strength, you need to grow up, son
I said: growing up leads to growing old and then to dying,
And dying to me don’t sound like all that much fun"

The Authority Song-John Mellencamp

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masshole Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 07:20 PM
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34. found this about the thumbs and toes
The only reference about the thumbs I found is that is done to represent a Namaskar.

For the toes, it appears it comes from a ritual beginning in the Vedic period.
"The corpse was washed (Atharvaveda V19.4) and the big toes tied together with a bunch of twigs, lest death should walk back to the house after the corpse was sent out (Atharvaveda V.19.12)."

From this page http://216.109.125.130/search/cache?p=hindu+thumbs+and+toes+tied&prssweb=Search&ei=UTF-8&fr=my-vert-web-top&x=wrt&u=www.sanathanadharma.com/samskaras/antyesti.htm&w=hindu+thumbs+toes+tied&d=GlafYBbfMbg8&icp=1&.intl=us

Good Luck!
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seaglass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-29-06 06:20 AM
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36. Thanks for this, it's more info than I could find. n/t
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mzteris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-28-06 07:23 PM
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35. Sixty thousand years ago,
Neandertals interred a member of their clan with flowers, a bear skull, and a ring of stones in Shanidar cave.
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Starbucks Anarchist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-29-06 07:06 AM
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37. Okay:
"The homogeneity of death is subject to a wide array of post-mortem rituals in various religions."

Best I could come up with.

:shrug:
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