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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:10 AM
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A Love Poem...
Have you ever

Loved someone so much

That every breath is a hymn of praise?


I have


And the words just pour out of me

Every breath sings

My throat catches with joy

My heartbeat rises

And I tremble

For he has opened the door

And so much of what I am

Is because of him…




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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:13 AM
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1. ,,,
yes, and she dumped me many moons ago...

:shrug:


:hi:


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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:15 AM
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2. My dear Southpawkicker....
I am so sorry, sweetie......

Hope someone else even better comes along soon.......:hug:
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Shine Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:15 AM
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3. Happy anniversary eve!
yes, tomorrow is our special day with our beloveds.
:loveya:

Wishing you many years of love and happiness together as you share the ups and downs of life. :toast:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:17 AM
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4. My dear Shine!
Indeed, and I am certainly aware of it!

I thank you for your good wishes, sweetie.....

And send those eloquent words back to you.......:loveya:
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malta blue Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:52 AM
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14. Hi Shine :)
Happy Anniverasry Eve to you as well.:pals:
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Shine Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 02:57 PM
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42. Hey, baby!!
:loveya: Thanks so much!! How's life on your end, lately?? What's the latest? Did you have a great visiti with your mom?? :hi: xoxo!
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fizzgig Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:18 AM
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5. that is wonderful, peggy
you've put my feelings into words better than i ever could have :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:20 AM
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6. My dear kagehime.......
Oh, sweetie....I am very happy to hear this!

I know of your love...and to have my little poem work for you makes my day.....:hug:

Thank you....:pals:
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Danger Mouse Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:23 PM
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48. oh dear...
:blush:
thank you.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-13-07 12:58 AM
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52. My dear Elrond Hubbard...
You're welcome, sweetie....:hug:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:32 AM
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7. you really do know the language of love
very nice, thanks:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:34 AM
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8. My dear wildhorses...
Sometimes yes, I do....

Thanks, sweetie.......

The door opens, and the words pour out.....I have no idea where they come from...:hug:
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UrbScotty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:43 AM
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9. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:45 AM
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10. My dear ih8thegop!
Wow, sweetie.....

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I'm so pleased you like my little work....:hug:
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u4ic Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:47 AM
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11. That's a lovely poem, Peggy
Thank you for sharing it with us! :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:49 AM
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12. My dear u4ic....
Edited on Tue Jun-12-07 01:49 AM by CaliforniaPeggy
Thank you, sweetie.....

I'm so pleased you like it...

This one's pretty personal, and I almost didn't post it....

I appreciate your saying what you did.......about sharing.

:hug:
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malta blue Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:50 AM
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13. California Peggy...
That is beautiful:thumbsup:

I'm not usually awake at this time but the stress of moving has me a little discombobulated. These beautiful sentiment may be just the thing I need to help me get back to sleep....after all I have to wake up in 2 hours for work.:grr:

Thank you for sharing your insightful wisdom through one of your many special talents...
:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:54 AM
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15. My dear malta blue...
I cannot thank you enough for your kind words...

I hear you about the stress of moving, and I hope my little work will help ease you back to sleep...

Two hours? Five in the morning? I'm sorry to hear that...Hope you can get some more good rest now...

It is always my pleasure to share my writing with you...

:loveya:


:hug:
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 06:41 AM
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16. What a wonderful poem
Peggy. You must have been completely enchanted by a special person to be this inspired.

I wish some day that I can again experience those feeling towards someone.

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 10:58 AM
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24. My dear Simply Fugue...
Thank you!

And indeed I was...

I wish the same for you.......:hug:
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My Good Babushka Donating Member (966 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 06:45 AM
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17. Lovely!
What a lovely, distilled, singular moment! It's meditative and joyful.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:00 AM
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25. My dear House of Kewpie...
Oh, thank you!

From one poet to another.......high praise indeed...

I do not know where the words come from, sometimes.......and this was one of them...

:hug:
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 06:46 AM
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18. Lovely ~ MissPeggy!



I totally understand your feelings.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:02 AM
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26. My dear Joani...
Thank you soooo much.......

The universal language of love!

And it does indeed keep us alive... :hug:
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TOhioLiberal Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 06:51 AM
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19. I'm happy for you.
...but as for me, :cry:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:03 AM
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27. My dear TOhioLiberal....
Oh sweetie.....I'm so sorry...:hug:
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TOhioLiberal Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:43 PM
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36. Don't worry...
...I'll feel that way about somebody someday. I guarantee it. :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:52 PM
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37. I profoundly wish it for you....
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:32 AM
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20. Yes.
:hug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:07 AM
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28. ....
:hug:
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crim son Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:59 AM
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21. I recognize that love.
One of your best, Peggy. :loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:08 AM
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29. My dear crim son!
Thank you, sweetie!

I don't even remember just when I wrote this........

It astonishes me...

:loveya:
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Fran Kubelik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 10:14 AM
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22.  Awwwwwwwwww!
Inspired by your anniversary? How very very sweet. :loveya: Your husband is a lucky man. And it sounds like you are a lucky woman. How beautiful!! :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:10 AM
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30. My dear Fran Kubelik!
Yes, it was inspired by my anniversary.......

My husband and I are sooo damn lucky to have found one another..........

Thank you... :hug:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 10:19 AM
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23. That's wonderful Peggy
I know that feeling well. :loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:11 AM
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31. My dear BarenakedLady!
Thank you!

I'm glad you've felt this too.......it's always amazing...:loveya:
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greatauntoftriplets Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:13 AM
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32. Peggy, what a lovely anniversary tribute to your husband.
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:14 AM
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34. My dear greatauntoftriplets...
Thank you........

:hug:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:13 AM
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33. Loverly!
Im gonna edit in my mind "she" for "he."

For he has opened the door

I feel that, and its a beautiful feeling. I'm all schmoopie again.

Thank you so much for sharing it.

I hope you have a super day today!

:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 11:18 AM
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35. My dear Inchworm!
I'm so glad you're all schmoopie again, sweetie!

It is my pleasure to share........

Even though this poem lets you into my heart, my core......it's almost too much, too personal...

But judging the responses, I am glad I did post this...

It seems to have struck a chord in the Lounge today...

Thank you for your very kind words.......:loveya:

Our day is already splendid...
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av8rdave Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 12:58 PM
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38. That's awesome! Thanks for the day brightener
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:02 PM
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39. My dear av8rdave!
Oh thank you for my day brightener!

So glad you like my little poem.....

:hug:
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TheProphetess Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:18 PM
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40. Love can be wonderful
What a beautiful poem! There is nothing that compares to finding your partner in life.

Congratulations to you and Mr. CAPeggy on your anniversary!
:toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 01:21 PM
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41. My dear Prophetess!
Oh thank you!

I appreciate your kind wishes and great thoughts!

:hug:
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VenusRising Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 06:47 PM
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43. CaliforniaPeggy, the Poetess.
That was lovely in so many ways.

Love is the most wonderful endeavor with the right person.

I wish you and your love many more years of happiness.

Happy Anniversary!!

:loveya::hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 07:34 PM
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44. My dear VenusRising...
Oh, thank you, sweetie!

Everything you say here is sooo true.......

We do look forward to many more years of happiness...

:loveya: :hug:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 07:36 PM
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45. That is intense!
:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 07:38 PM
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46. My dear KitchenWitch...
It is.....

Some days I don't know where this sort of thing comes from...

Sorry I missed your call...I was napping...

Thanks, sweetie.....:hug:
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GenDem Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:22 PM
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47. That's beautiful, Peggy
Happy anniversary!

Your words are the same expression that I feel for my old man.

Thanks for sharing. It's lovely.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:26 PM
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49. My dear GenDem...
Thank you, sweetie....

I appreciate your kind comments and your congrats on today!

:hug:
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HCE SuiGeneris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:31 PM
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50. I put this in my file that is reserved for
Georgia O'Keefe
Ralph Waldo Emerson

and now you as well... simply beautiful Peggy :pals:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-12-07 09:35 PM
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51. My dear BushDespiser12...
I am simply taken aback....

There's no way I belong with those folks....

Thank you for your praise....

Even though I don't feel as though I deserve it...

When something like this comes out of me, I feel as though I am only the conduit, and that the words came from someplace else...

I am extremely touched and honored by your words here today...:hug:
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