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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:02 PM
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The GoPsUx other one time only Poetry thread.12/17/07
The underwater kite
by GoPsUx
As I sit here reevaluating the sparrows of my morbid pain.
I dream of rabid Twinkies of false knowledge.
I see pink turtles of loving hatred run marathons across my brow.
What came first the chicken or the seal?? I wonder..
And just who rubs the genitalia of hope held therein.
Is it your hand that pats me jokingly during my momentary hours of seldom pain.
Where are my shoes?
I long for salad..



I feel Naked after this one...
:popcorn:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:03 PM
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1. Bravo!
:applause:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:04 PM
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2. Thank you my friend
So much is said in this heartfelt poem :silly: :dunce:
And :hi:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:04 PM
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3. Yay!
who rubs the genitalia of hope

I have pondered this!

:yourock:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:05 PM
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4. And more important
Can I keep hope up!
:hide:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:07 PM
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5. yes- the sequel may need
pink turtle fluffers

:rofl:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:09 PM
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6. The sequel may be too painful to write
:P
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:11 PM
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7. Dude
Where are my shoes?
I long for salad.

You are better than you think...

:hi:

RL
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:13 PM
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8. Thank you
We all long for salad don't we...sigh
:hi:
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Writer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:19 PM
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9. ROFL!
:rofl:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:21 PM
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10. You laugh at my pain
Are you made of ice woman??
:D :hi:
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Writer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:24 PM
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11. I am crying over here...
frozen tears of veggie burgers and Certs mints.
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:26 PM
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12. Sure...
Invoke your private pigeons of true falsehood.
I just don't believe that there is any food in the frozen desert of your burning heart...
Hater...
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Writer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:30 PM
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14. ...
:rofl:

:rofl:

:rofl:
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Writer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:28 PM
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13. RECOMMEND THIS THREAD!
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otherlander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:50 PM
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15. Cool. My turn.
I read a book without words
and walked through a crowd of crows
where a woman psychoanalized my hairdye.
To her I said, "Goodbye."
I gave myself a tattoo.
I am short. Are you?
Why?
A man opened his overcoat on the subway
showing the whole world
that he was fully dressed underneath.
Shocked, the people turned away.
I found a turtle under my couch.

:rofl:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:52 PM
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16. ....
:hug:..I am crying..;(
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Fire Walk With Me Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:52 PM
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17. Author! Author!
:applause:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Dec-17-07 07:53 PM
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18. ..
i am but one man..
With a salt laden crystal heart.
All is lost..
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