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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 05:18 AM
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The GoPsUx 6th! one time only, semi occasional poem thread intermission.
The Apathetic Zucchini

The bag of deep-fried-salt-encrusted-puffy-nothings lay sealed upon my desk.
While on my window sill,annoying squirrels crack acorns of triumphant defeat!
I feel a new old.
The lemmings of my mind stampede quietly, foolishly stalking the over amorous octopus of my pure perversion.
I have a blister.
I once knew a brave coward.
He said to me "Dude,protect your junk".
I cried.
Who will herd this salamander of fate?
Will the rhinoceros conquer it?
I wonder if my eggs are done boiling?
Me thinks my fish know something.
When will they talk?
When will they love.

GoPsUx is a (N)oet from Kcmo.If you like his poetry check out his other works at.
Http://www.thisisntarealwebpageandifyouclickityouareinsane.com
:crazy:
Yeah I'm bored.. :dunce:



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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 06:34 AM
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1. the over amorous octopus of my pure perversion
I've heard that about you...

:hi:

RL
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:10 AM
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5. Yea
Not much is pure about my perversion though :silly:
:P :hi:
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Fran Kubelik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 07:23 AM
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2. unexpectedly
this made me laugh. :thumbsup:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:11 AM
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7. You mock my pain?
:rofl: If anything I'm good for a chuckle.:rofl:
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ccharles000 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 07:30 AM
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3. lovely
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:11 AM
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8. danka
:)
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 08:30 AM
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4. good advice --
protect your junk
mine is in the trunk
bo-dunka dunk!
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:12 AM
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9. This thread is useless
w/o pictures :evilgrin:
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:23 AM
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11. keep it up --
I love it when you beg :D

:shrug: who knows, one day you may get a PM :evilgrin:

:hug: :hi:
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mtnester Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 11:24 AM
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13. Mkay...
Edited on Tue Aug-05-08 12:21 PM by mtnester
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 01:07 PM
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16. looks better than the real one
:D
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:10 AM
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6. *snaps fingers*
You are teh awesome, Dude.

:hug:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 09:13 AM
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10. Hey you.
:):hi: I am nothing next to the wonderful BNL :hug: :loveya:
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Dangerously Amused Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 11:21 AM
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12. You had me at "Apathetic Zucchini."

:rofl:






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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 01:08 PM
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17. I should have added llamas
:D :hi:
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Writer Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 12:12 PM
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14. You are a fucking genius.
Brilliant stuff, through and through.

:hug:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 01:08 PM
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18. I am glad someone thinks so
Edited on Tue Aug-05-08 01:11 PM by GoPsUx
:hug: :pals:
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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 12:20 PM
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15. "I feel a new old"
That line is terrific. *steals it and runs away*

:hug:
:loveya:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-05-08 01:09 PM
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19. Plagiarize at will
:loveya: :hi:
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