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byronius Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-05-07 08:24 PM
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it's a near thing.
Edited on Fri Jan-05-07 08:38 PM by byronius
some are sleeping some are dying

some are laughing

some are having great sex

some are stalking.

my quark-filled machine pattern reactifymacreadyports like a nation

this is all magic

but we are early models and freaked-out geeks

wall to wall nervous systems skittering on the slippery plate SMACK

some are having fun

5:17 PM 1/5/07

i'm pulling out and greeting roaderie

toys and apprehension and white and dark and compression with fast attack low release punching at 15DB

some are waiting some yowling

spinning magic space, early models

some are smoking some are writing some are drinking

some are thinking

it's a near thing.
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govegan Donating Member (661 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-13-07 03:00 PM
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1. and it's a thinking thing
Edited on Tue Feb-13-07 03:12 PM by govegan
thinking big
thinking on

nearly thinking
"sometimes i do"
quoth the owl.

:-)

Not really trying to be cryptic, just thinking on your inspiration.

Poetry freak? Check out my post on Kinnell's new book.

:think:
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