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But if a person is going to write a letter to the president and expect to get past the first screening, it helps to write an intelligent letter.
Using the phrase "Augean stable(s)" implies that the writer actually knows what the phrase means. It does not mean that the stables are in or on or near the Aegean Sea. Misuse of one word/phrase indicates a possible innocent mistake, but this particular phrase indicates a desire to impress. It's not that weird or unusual a reference, but it's not one used in daily conversation.
The run-on sentence -- it's not even a comma splice of two independent sentences -- indicates the letter writer doesn't know basic English grammar. A concerned parent, yes, but not one who routinely actually writes.
Bellwether is similar to Augean -- often, too often, misused. But it is now the second wrong word in a very very short letter. When the whole rein/reign thing comes into play, this little short letter becomes an exercise in semi-literacy. It would never have received a passing grade in your average junior high in my day which is admittedly many long years ago.
The intent of the letter was to elicit a sense of common purpose and in doing so to prod the president into taking more forceful action against "the corporations," a sentiment I heartily share. But just as the letter writer feels free to criticize the president's actions or inactions, he/she put the letter out here on the DU and thus invites both criticism (constructive or otherwise) and praise. I chose to offer criticism, because there were simply too many errors in too short a letter.
I'm a writer and I've taught writing. I don't usually nitpick the posts on DU, but when the post is a letter and it's intended to go beyond the confines of DU, then I feel I have a right -- and in some cases even an obligation -- to point out the errors.
But hey, if you can't handle criticism. . . . . I could give a fuck less who puts me on ignore and who doesn't, except that I think it's against the rules to announce it.
Tansy Gold
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