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Garion_55

(1,915 posts)
Sun Mar 4, 2018, 12:48 PM Mar 2018

A poem I wrote about domestic violence 10 years ago.

Still seems relevant though unfortunately 8-(







She leaves....



She sits and she looks to the stars in the night
She figures she must do the thing that is right

Get on with her life and get on with it fast
Think to the future move on from the past

Away from the anger, away from the pain
She looks at her dress at the blood and the stain

He thought he was macho he thought he was tough
She finally decided that she'd had enough

She packed up her bags and she'd move right away
Her life with this monster? This was the last day

Deep in her heart she still loved this dark man
But he shouldn't be any part of her plan

Enough with the violence, enough the abuse
These things in a man she just couldn't use

'I'll leave him, that's it, I just have to be free
I don't know about him but it's better for me

I'm tired of hurting and he doesn't care'
She wipes off a tear runs her hands through her hair

She wished she could be back with him in his arms
Away from the fear and away from the harm

She wanted the man that she wished he could be
But knew it was wrong just a pure fantasy

If there's one thing on earth that she'd ever know
Is he'd never change and that she'd have to go

She knew that she'd have to and have to do soon
She looked to the sky and prayed under the moon

She makes her decision looks foward ahead
Better to move on then found somewhere dead

She'd be glad at the path she decided to take
She'd now have the life that she wanted to make




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A poem I wrote about domestic violence 10 years ago. (Original Post) Garion_55 Mar 2018 OP
Wow. That has a wonderfully...committed cadence, Hortensis Mar 2018 #1
thank you! Garion_55 Mar 2018 #6
A poem so full of truth. Big kick and rec! backtoblue Mar 2018 #2
thank you so much! Garion_55 Mar 2018 #5
Well done. K&R nolabear Mar 2018 #3
Wow, really captures it. cilla4progress Mar 2018 #4

Hortensis

(58,785 posts)
1. Wow. That has a wonderfully...committed cadence,
Sun Mar 4, 2018, 01:16 PM
Mar 2018

all the long period of doubt over. I hope others who need help arriving at that point somehow find it.

"She looked to the sky and prayed under the moon"

Lovely.

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