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GenXer47

(1,204 posts)
Tue Mar 21, 2023, 04:56 PM Mar 2023

P is for PRISON

Here's mine:

P is for Poopy, filthy jailhouse pants
R for the Recess where he plays with the ants
I is for Ignorant, stupid and dumb
S for the Sock used to wipe his fat bum
O is for Over, no one will "be wild"
N for the Nights when he sobs like a child.
"He lives now in PRISON, a cold lonely place. It's better than what I would do to his face!"

And here's CHAT GPT's 2nd attempt, after reading my example:

P is for Pondering, regret fills his mind
R for the Reality, he can't leave behind
I is for Inmate, he's just one of the crowd
S for the Solitude, his thoughts are loud
O is for One, he's alone in his cell
N for the Never-ending, it's his personal hell.
"He lives now in PRISON, a sentence he deserved. It's where he'll stay, his actions were observed."

Not bad!!!

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P is for PRISON (Original Post) GenXer47 Mar 2023 OP
the ChatGPT poem is actually very good. lapfog_1 Mar 2023 #1
it's pretty amazing GenXer47 Mar 2023 #2

lapfog_1

(29,189 posts)
1. the ChatGPT poem is actually very good.
Tue Mar 21, 2023, 05:01 PM
Mar 2023

Amazing... and I have known about this for quite some time since I work at the company that made ChatGPT possible (the hardware it runs on).

 

GenXer47

(1,204 posts)
2. it's pretty amazing
Tue Mar 21, 2023, 05:26 PM
Mar 2023

I first asked it to write an acrostic poem about Trump in prison, but it was a little loose and had poor rhythm.
But then I provided an example and it mimicked me - the syllable count, the themes, everything.
Damn fine programming.

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