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Related: Culture Forums, Support ForumsIs it "poetry" after a "Happy" Hour?!1 Work in progress, alternative words in parentheses:
Belay my demise
for tomorrow, for the morrow, for forever -
Ive got things to do -
errands, pastimes, lazing around -
anything to put things off (anything to put it all off) (anything to put it off)
Belay my demise
Whom I talking to
God, a fellow human,
anybody else who doesnt listen?
Belay my demise
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Is it "poetry" after a "Happy" Hour?!1 Work in progress, alternative words in parentheses: (Original Post)
UTUSN
May 2017
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UTUSN
(70,649 posts)1. Another, separate strain
Salad in a soup bowl
Pastry to avoid the goo -
A spoon
UTUSN
(70,649 posts)2. Or am I I, the Great Non-Listener?
hedda_foil
(16,371 posts)3. I love it!!! It's a jazz poem.
I wish you'd keep all three alternatives just as they are. Together they create an irresistible backbeat, murmuring of our inborn longing to put off the inevitable end.
I love it!
UTUSN
(70,649 posts)4. Omz, what a kind reaction, thanks so much!