dylb
dylb's JournalI Got My First Song On The Radio, Tell Me What You Think
Thanks for being open enough to let me share some tunes with you. I need some feedback on a song called "Someone Worth Loving"
You can listen to the song here: https://soundcloud.com/dylanbriscall/someone-worth-loving
Verse 1:
Is this real, Do these moments count when we're gone, Do the lips we kiss form a bond with the blood in our veins, That runs through our hearts, Is it worth, All the sacrifice, To break free, From the lonely nights, In a complicated city made of tainted glass
Pre Chorus:
Now I won't lie, There were times when I thought love was pointless, Times when I thought I was hopeless, To the voices inside my mind
Chorus:
Watch me erupt in flames, Then learn to fly, Like a Phoenix does in time, I'll earn wings, Then rise from the ashes from whence I came, These wounds will heal, And mark my soul, Like the road signs on the journey home, And underneath, I hope you'll find, Someone worth loving, Someone worth loving for life
Verse 2:
Give it time, This momentum will shift in its place, Realign with the channels of fate that defend the emotions you always pushed aside, For too long I delayed what I figured out, Before water could land on the seed of doubt, That's been growing, And oh it's been growing, For far to long
Bridge:
For life I was walking where shadows lay lost some friends that were close to the
same mistakes as before so I'm not doing that anymore
Chorus
I Just Finished My First Demo, I'd Appreciate If Someone Listned
Thanks for being open enough to let me share some tunes with you.
I'm on SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/dylanbriscall
All the songs on Early Mornings, Late Nights, and Long Roads were written and composed by me and were produced by Joel Kazmi--who’s worked with artists like The Tea Party, Rush, N’sync, Sum 41, and Anne Murray.
If you don't want to listen that is absolutely cool and if you can recommend some new music or mention any great shows you've seen lately, that would be great.
Cheers!
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Name: DylanGender: Do not display
Home country: Canada
Current location: GTA
Member since: Tue Sep 6, 2016, 08:23 PM
Number of posts: 15
