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MiddleFingerMom

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3. My best... which was printed on a rice paper insert in the middle of a literary magazine.

Mon Feb 11, 2013, 11:15 AM

Feb 2013

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Frozen autumn doe
Feigns invisibility.
Inhales my presence.
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Its title was a haiku, but nowhere near as good as the haiku itself, so they left it off.
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Under Surveillance
While Tending a Remote Field
of Marijuana.
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My only erotic haiku:
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Auto-Erotaiku
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Oyster moist and warm
Raw ocean's movement pulses.
Pearl glows with pleasure.
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Haiku Thread - post your favorite or make stuff up [View all] Xipe Totec Feb 2013 OP

This is one of my favorites: In_The_Wind Feb 2013 #1

I love it! nt Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #8

Heh Xyzse Feb 2013 #2

My best... which was printed on a rice paper insert in the middle of a literary magazine. MiddleFingerMom Feb 2013 #3

Most excellent! Particularly the last one Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #9

Auto-Erotaiku In_The_Wind Feb 2013 #22

This is not a Haiku Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #27

Haiku Doc_Technical Feb 2013 #4

... Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #10

Let's do this thing. Dr. Strange Feb 2013 #5

... Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #7

One of my favorites: Orrex Feb 2013 #6

Dinner plans Chellee Feb 2013 #11

... Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #14

You're good. Chellee Feb 2013 #16

Ok. Blizzard 2013 Chellee Feb 2013 #12

Works for me! Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #13

Spring. Chellee Feb 2013 #15

Early Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #17

Dreaming. Chellee Feb 2013 #18

Haikus to a Saturday morning in New England Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #19

Xipe Totec for the win! Chellee Feb 2013 #20

I wanted to share these with receptive soul Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #21

PS: Your last Haiku was deeply touching Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #23

Thank you. Chellee Feb 2013 #26

Here's mine mokawanis Feb 2013 #24

Heh! Xipe Totec Feb 2013 #25

I don't usually write Haikus, but when I do, BlancheSplanchnik Feb 2013 #28