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Liberalynn

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10. That's a good point about jurisdiction!
Sat Feb 7, 2015, 02:24 PM
Feb 2015

I hadn't thought about that. I will have to rework the first chapter. I am writing him as just having come home from closing a serial killer case and that he's exhausted and on the edge of burn out. I want him to reluctantly get involved with the mystery of the skeleton in the wall and protecting his new neighbor.

So I will either have to rework how he initially gets dragged in entirely or as the above poster suggested explain a reason why he chose to bypass protocol. I didn't have him touch the skeleton because I figured he'd definitely know not to disturb evidence.

I do know some lawyers in town, as I took some paralegal courses, so maybe they can tell me who in the police or Sheriff's office might be open to talking to a beginning writer about police procedure.

Thank you!

intriguing marym625 Feb 2015 #1
Thank You Liberalynn Feb 2015 #2
Thanks. marym625 Feb 2015 #3
Holy moly, that's the first thing that popped into my head. If she's black, she gets shot dead. valerief Feb 2015 #6
How could we not think it? n/t marym625 Feb 2015 #7
I know. We'd be liars if we didn't with all the reports of police killings we're made aware of valerief Feb 2015 #9
You can't help but think that. Liberalynn Feb 2015 #11
Hmmm... TuxedoKat Feb 2015 #4
Thank You Liberalynn Feb 2015 #8
You're Welcome TuxedoKat Feb 2015 #13
Thanks Again Liberalynn Feb 2015 #14
One thing that comes to mind: The Velveteen Ocelot Feb 2015 #5
That's a good point about jurisdiction! Liberalynn Feb 2015 #10
There might be some exceptions to situations where FBI agents The Velveteen Ocelot Feb 2015 #12
I remembered a lady I went through a paralegal Liberalynn Feb 2015 #15
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