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Response to Elessiana (Reply #6)

Sun Feb 28, 2016, 01:13 AM

9. I've always heard that there is no good writing, only good rewriting.

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What is necessary in you design, what dilutes your design? You have a lot of elements, many that could stand alone. Simplify, edit out what isn't helpful in you story. The colors are fine.

I learned a lot when I was making kites. I learned the best designs are simple designs that make one clear message. Hata kites and the designs of Tal Streeter influenced me as I transitioned to photography. he was inspired by the simple designs of Japanese art.

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