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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 08:23 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 2/28/06)
Here Is A Wound That Never Will Heal, I Know

Here is a wound that never will heal, I know,
Being wrought not of a dearness and a death,
But of a love turned ashes and the breath
Gone out of beauty; never again will grow
The grass on that scarred acre, though I sow
Young seed there yearly and the sky bequeath
Its friendly weathers down, far Underneath
Shall be such bitterness of an old woe.
That April should be shattered by a gust,
That August should be levelled by a rain,
I can endure, and that the lifted dust
Of man should settle to the earth again;
But that a dream can die, will be a thrust
Between my ribs forever of hot pain.

Edna St. Vincent Millay

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RL

Checkout the Daily Poem Archive at:
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.ph ...

and if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul

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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 08:32 AM
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1. I understand the pain....
but I refuse to believe that anything, no matter how bad, cannot be healed.

It's all about faith, baby.... ya gotta believe. O8)

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 11:53 AM
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10. It's all about faith, baby
Getting there, trying...

:hug:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 08:44 AM
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2. interesting -- spring contains the most violent weather
of any season.

and the north american continent has the most violent springs of any continent on earth.

morning!
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 11:52 AM
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8. Morning!
How are you today?

:hi:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 12:01 PM
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11. well. and your self?
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 01:20 PM
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13. Hanging in there...
:hi:

RL
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 08:55 AM
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3. Maybe it's not a question
of never healing, but of time putting distance from pain, to become an isolated memory.

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 11:52 AM
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7. Time and DIstance
Well, time is possible, distance will not be...

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 10:15 AM
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4. How are you doing today?
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 11:51 AM
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6. Better, thanks.
Lots of sleep and I took RevCheeseHead's advice and hit my knees this morning...

:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 11:35 AM
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5. My dear RetroLounge....
Another beauty......

The last two lines really move me:

But that a dream can die, will be a thrust
Between my ribs forever of hot pain.

I can hear the pain in these lines, and feel it so profoundly myself...

I know a little about dreams dying, and it always hurts enormously...


:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 11:53 AM
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9. My Dear CP
Glad you like it.

My goal for the next few days is to find some happy, hopeful poetry...

RL
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 12:05 PM
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12. Tis better to have known love ~

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 01:20 PM
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14. Not so sure...
:shrug:

RL
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 01:43 PM
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15. I am sure.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 04:13 PM
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16. Then I'll trust you on that...
:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Feb-28-06 07:03 PM
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17. I'm sure too
:hug:

As painful as it's been, without it, I wouldn't have my daughter and a few good memories. I would choose not to go down that particular path again, but I don't regret the decisions made. They were all made for the right reasons.

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