**A silly poem for today** - Democratic Underground

CaliforniaPeggy

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Thu Oct-05-06 02:32 PM
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**A silly poem for today**

Nimbus

What is this gray cloud?

I stare at the mirror

It radiates out from my face

A silvery gray cloud

Am I holy?

Hardly

Upon seeing my face in the bathroom mirror, yesterday...

Tell me what you think!

:hi:

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ZombieNixon

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Thu Oct-05-06 02:34 PM
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1. Heh...I like it

Not sure why, but it made me smile. :D

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Thu Oct-05-06 02:37 PM
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2. My dear Zombie!

Thanks!

Well, it is rather silly and like that.........

I'm glad it made you smile!

:hug:

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Haole Girl

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Thu Oct-05-06 03:00 PM
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3. This one made me smile!

Edited on Thu Oct-05-06 03:00 PM by KC2

And, I could just picture you looking into the mirror!

Thank you for sharing it! :D

Edit: Oh man...I didn't mean to just copy ZN's post....but, it *did* make me smile!

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Thu Oct-05-06 03:39 PM
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5. My dear KC2!

Glad it made you smile, too!

Yeah, that's how it was, looking in the mirror....

I was at least a little bit inspired!

Thanks, sweetie! :hug:

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RetroLounge

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Thu Oct-05-06 03:02 PM
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4. I like it.

but lose the "hardly" I think...

leave it unanswered.

just my .02

:hi:

RL

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Thu Oct-05-06 03:42 PM
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6. My dear RetroLounge!

Edited on Thu Oct-05-06 03:44 PM by CaliforniaPeggy

Thanks, sweetie!

But I wanted to end it with a bit of a snap, and the hardly does that!

But I do appreciate your taking the time for helping me...

After all, I am just the novice, at the master's knee!

BTW, did you see my poem from yesterday? It's a lot darker.

I'll get the link for you...

:hi: back atcha!

On edit: the link for yesterday's poem:
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_topic&forum=105&topic_id=5697964

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khashka

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Thu Oct-05-06 06:30 PM
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7. I like it..... but

you are violating the DU division of labour!

RL does poetry.
I do sex and lyrics.
And you're nice to everyone.

By taking over poetry... that means RL takes over sex&lyrics and I have to be nice to people. It violates the natural order of things!

Joking apart, you know I like your poetry. Keep writing it and posting it.

Khash.

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Thu Oct-05-06 08:35 PM
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8. My dear Khash!

LOL!

I know you're kidding........

It just keeps on coming out of me........And you know full well at least some of it will see the light of day right here.....

Glad you like it, sweetie! :hug:

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