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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:12 PM
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**My Poem**
Where the Road Takes You


We don’t know where the road will go...

But out the door we must

Following the twists and turns...

Ups and downs,

Be it level, smooth or bumpy...


How different our lives would have been

If we hadn’t gone down that road

So long ago.


Now the road has put us here

And we stand face to face with ourselves.


The world has fallen away

There is a great vacant land between us...

I’m waiting for you to enter my soul

And take possession...


But you hesitate

Is the road calling you away?

Ah, go if you must...

Follow your path!



Has tomorrow stretched out its hand?

Has it seduced you?


I am weaving a seductive web

But you tear away

Down the road towards the future...

You’re leaving me here



And I will travel the road alone...









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Road Scholar Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:14 PM
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1. Nice.Thank you for sharing.
Edited on Sun Sep-30-07 11:15 PM by In_Transit
I can't imagine you alone.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:15 PM
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3. My dear In_Transit...
Edited on Sun Sep-30-07 11:16 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
Thank you....

Glad you liked it!

:hi:

On edit: Not to worry, I'm not...not by a long shot!
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:14 PM
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2. ...
:cry:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:18 PM
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4. My dear KC2...
Aw, sweetie, don't cry...

It's purely fictional...

I'm sure it did happen to someone at some time, though...

:loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Ptah Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:25 PM
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5. My favorite lines:
Now the road has put us here

And we stand face to face with ourselves.





Thank you Peggy
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:28 PM
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6. My dear Ptah!
Ah, I like those as well...

Thank you, sweetie...:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:29 PM
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7. It reminds me of Tolkein.
You ol' smooth talker, you. :yourock:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:32 PM
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8. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six!
How nice of you to come play in my thread, sweetie!

Tolkien?

That's quite a lovely statement...

Thank you...:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:44 PM
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11. One of mine for you, in response. Hope you enjoy it.
Edited on Sun Sep-30-07 11:45 PM by Prisoner_Number_Six
THE DRUMMER

I hear the different drummer;
a wanderer am I-
A seeker of a different thing
that is still undefined.
I listen to the questions
so persistent in my head,
and try to find the answers
to the things that have been said.
It's lonely on this dusty path;
I'm tired, and I fear-
but I will search until I find
the drummer that I hear.

© 2007 Steven A. Hessler
All Rights Reserved
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:47 PM
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12. Truly, enjoy is not the word...
I love your poem, my dear friend...

It is really beautiful, and meaningful to me...

This one will live in me...

Thank you for sharing it ... :hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:52 PM
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14. I must have been all of 23 when I wrote that.
It could stand a rewrite, but I think I'll let it stand as is. It meant a lot to me when I wrote it and I still like it, especially the final lines.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:54 PM
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15. I would never have guessed that you were so young...
And I agree...don't revise it.

The last four lines are amazingly moving...:hug:
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otherlander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:38 PM
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9. Kind of reminds me of Joni Mitchell:
Go where you will go to, know that I will know you...

:cry:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:43 PM
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10. My dear otherlander...
More distinguished company...Joni Mitchell!

Thank you...

Didn't mean to make you cry, sweetie...:hug:
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otherlander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:52 PM
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13. It's a sad poem...
But it's beautiful, too. :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-30-07 11:56 PM
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16. Thank you...
:hug:
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