A Good Kiss-- homework for my poetry class...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

A Good Kiss

A good kiss opens you
Your helpless body awakens

When mouths and lips and god help us tongues meet
all bets are off
as to where this kiss will go

Follow it

let it lead you

let the kiss go where it may

Let your body tell you
What it needs

Only a fool doesn’t listen

You might be surprised
At what it says
Or not
Who knows?

To be struck open with passion may bring you unexpected joy
or sorrow
But that is what your life is
You are not dead yet

Not if that kiss is any indication

[redqueen]

1. Very nice!

Got my ears perked, for sure.

:applause:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear redqueen!

This one was tough to write...

But I like how it turned out...

Thanks, sweetie!

I appreciate it a lot...:hug:

[redqueen]

3. Tough to write, huh?

Well I'm glad you stuck with it... the results speak for themselves!

:hug:

[Parche]

4. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy

SEX THREAD ALERT..................:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:


Mine was in Honolulu...............(The Best Kiss)
So true.........
:hi:

"The Inheritors are on their way. In a universe of billions of stars, there are places of love and happiness. On this Earth, in this spot, magic settled for a moment. Wonder touched a few lives, and a few odd pieces fell smoothly into the jigsaw of Creation."

[CaliforniaPeggy]

5. My dear Parche!

Oh, riiiiiiiiiight! Sex thread alert indeed!

I gather you enjoyed this one?

Thanks for being here, sweetie!

:hug:

[malta blue]

6. Very nice Peggy - thank you

for sharing it with us.

:hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

9. My dear malta blue...

You're welcome, sweetie...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!

:hug:

[BarenakedLady]

7. Very yummy

:*

Good job, Peggy!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. My dear BarenakedLady...

Ah, thank you, sweetie...

I thought it was yummy too!

A kiss can be that way, can't it?

:hug:

[UrbScotty]

8. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!

As I may or may not have said in another thread, I like how poetry brings out the beauty in the simple things in life - like a kiss.

Which, of course, is more than just a simple thing sometimes!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

12. My dear ih8thegop...

Thank you...

Poetry does indeed do that...

And I am glad for it...

The consequences of kisses can be most complicated!

:hug:

[Haole Girl]

11. What an emotionally powerful poem!

I love it! Thank you for sharing it with us.
:loveya:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

13. My dear KC2!

Oh, thank you!

I really appreciate your very kind words!

And you know how I am about sharing...

I live, and love, to share...

I would die if I couldn't ...

:loveya:

[Haole Girl]

15. Me too!

:hug: :D :loveya:

[Inchworm]

14. I felt this one...

I long for that kiss.

Thank you Ms Peggy.

:loveya:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. My dear Inchworm...

I'm so glad you felt it...

I think we all long for that kiss, don't we?

Even us old married folks do...

You're most welcome, sweetie!

:loveya: back atcha!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

17. **Shameless Update**

Well, I got my poem back from my teacher today...

She wrote on it:

This is my very favorite poem thus far.

:blush:

:woohoo: :woohoo:

[zingaro]

18. It's easy to see why. Lovely poem!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

19. My dear zingaro!

How very sweet of you to say this!

Thank you...

:hug:

[The Animator]

20. Reminds me of my best kiss..

Wow, it's been, months, but my lips still remember they way it felt... She was an incredible kisser. hell I could feel it in my socks.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

21. My dear Animator!

Wow, I am honored that you're in my thread!

And thank you for your very kind comments...

We do tend to remember those kisses, don't we?

I do too!

:bounce: :bounce:

[6000eliot]

22. You are really improving, Peggy!

The last line MAKES the poem.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

24. My dear 6000eliot...

Oh, thank you!

I really wasn't sure about this one...

It is hard to write on demand, and that's what I was doing here...

My teacher said this was her favorite of all the poems I've done for class so far...

I loved that last line too! I knew it was good when it showed up in my mind!

:hug:

[fizzgig]

23. i think this is my favorite one yet, peggy

it is absolutely fantastic

:hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

25. My dear kagehime!

Oh, thank you so much, sweetie!

That means a lot...

Amazing what we can do, isn't it?

My teacher also said it was her favorite of all the poems I've done for class...


:hug:

[Callalily]

26. Very nice.

And I think many should take this as advice!

Your poems seem to have a sensual nature. Hmmmmmm . . . just an observation.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

27. My dear Simply Fugue...

I'm glad you like it...

And yes, my poems are sensual, because I am ...

;-)

[MissMillie]

28. It almost makes me want to kiss you!

and I play for the other team!

:thumbsup:

Good work!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

30. My dear MissMillie!

Ooooh, thank you so much!

I hear that...

Yeah, I like men too...

:blush:

[SPKrazy]

29. A good kiss is unforgettable

recently had one of those

and i won't forget it

or actually a bunch of them that I won't forget collectively from a special person.

:hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

31. My dear Southpawkicker...

They are unforgettable, aren't they?

I've had some like that too...

Good for you, sweetie...

May you have many, many more...

:hug:

[SPKrazy]

32. that would be my dream

:shrug:


:hug:

[REDKING]

33. Like it.like it Peggy....

:toast:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

34. My dear Rory!

I'm so glad to see you today, sweetie...

And I'm really glad you like my little work too...

Thank you!

:hug: