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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-24-07 12:48 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 10/24/07 (warning: graphic language)
Edited on Wed Oct-24-07 01:26 PM by BlueIris
"Before Penicillin"
to the memory of E.S. Waring, M.D.


The doctor steps into the shack.

Light
is December dusk. Sleet clouds
bunched up.

All the beds are here in this one room
pushed up against the wall
and even from across the room and even in the shambling light
her face—

Mask-like. Greenish-gray.
The facies of impending death.

The parents
pull up a straight-backed chair for him.

He takes the hand of a child he delivered
fourteen years ago.

Her pulse is a thread
so thin it would fray if you blew on it.

It's alright, Evie.

Then he folds the army blanket down.

The girl's entire abdomen is abscessed.
Burst appendix rotting for days and now spread.

He listens to her chest,
tucks the blanket back under her chin.

She opens her mouth and the
smell

It is 1933.
There is no such thing as penicillin.

Let me get her to the hospital—

No, Sir, the father says. You take her over there, she'll die.

They quarrel until the mother says PLEASE
once, then is still.

When the doctor finally steps outside,
he can hear the younger children begin to keen.

He tugs the brim of his hat down low.
His wife will be angry again, at him and the house
and the bank in town which has filed to foreclose
and their four small girls whiny with colds and the sleet
which will needle him wicked thwik
on the road and in the ditch the nine miles home.

He can hear the younger children begin to scream.

He washes his hands on the bristling grass,
runs them under his mare’s black mane and
leans on her neck—

on her fragrant, inculpable neck.

—Belle Waring
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ThomCat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-24-07 12:55 PM
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1. It's scary to realize how many of us
just wouldn't be alive today if not for modern drugs. So much trajedy like this has been avoided.

And all I can think of is all the people today who still don't have ready access to modern medicine. :(

I hope that doesn't distract from the poem.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-24-07 12:58 PM
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2. Yup. As critical as I am of the pharmaceutical industries worldwide,
they did give us this.

And many other life-saving drugs without which—somtimes I sit around and imagine what it would be like to live in a world before vaccines, without anti-biotics, without hospitals. It's a world with very narrow parameters.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-24-07 03:13 PM
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3. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-24-07 04:57 PM
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4. Geeze, this got buried.
I didn't think it was that scary.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 02:32 AM
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5. Kick.
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