Lioness Priyanka Reviews her Personnel Textbook

[La Lioness Priyanka]

Could a writer ramble more? i doubt it?

Has the writer ever heard of concise writing? I doubt it

My god my text could put me to sleep oh so fast.

on review dont buy it.

[Blue-Jay]

1. IGNORED! You have no right to refer to yourself in third person.

[La Lioness Priyanka]

6. hey! hope you are doing ok.

[lizziegrace]

2. I was just thinking today you've been MIA

:hi:

[La Lioness Priyanka]

7. midterms. unfortunately.

[lizziegrace]

10. Hang in there

:hug:

[MonkeyFunk]

3. Now you've done it!

You used the forbidden word!

Next, I presume you'll be doing the Lambada.

[ChavezSpeakstheTruth]

4. Or take a trip to Beijing

[La Lioness Priyanka]

5. there's a forbidden word? what is it? is it personnel?

[MonkeyFunk]

8. I'm not allowed to say

[ChavezSpeakstheTruth]

9. No - textbook

silly

[Name removed]

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[Sugar Smack]

13. *Eggshells, dear!*

I have this beer & cheese thread that I think may be MAGNIFICENT.:P I want to see how the ingredients hold up. :D :hi:

[Fran Kubelik]

12. You're taking a class on personnel?

Is that as boring as it sounds?

[La Lioness Priyanka]

22. its worse. its a much of statistical stuff.

[ironflange]

14. Show us your Halloween costume!!

I've been waiting a whole year for it! :evilgrin:

[La Lioness Priyanka]

21. i did already~!

:P

[IndianaJones]

15. this is spam. nt.

[Fran Kubelik]

17. wtf?

[IndianaJones]

18. exactly. we're on the same page. nt.

[La Lioness Priyanka]

19. freep-head~

[La Lioness Priyanka]

20. freep-head~

[Dr. Strange]

23. No, THIS is spam

[Redstone]

16. You could actually get, if you don't mind me saying so, a professional opinion on your writing;

just by sending it to me. (Ask LauraMN how it worked out for her when I edited her article.)

You'd just have to be patient, because it takes me a while to get to that stuff, but I guarantee you that you'd end up with professional editing of your work.

(Oh, and you'd have to accept any edits or comments professionally, not personally.)


Redstone