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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 09:39 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 1/16/08
"Events"

The night they find two women in a man's trunk
I watch "Inside Deep Throat" in my living room
At work the next day, I practice relaxing the muscles
at the back of my mouth
My boss asks me if anything is wrong
I picture what I look like in the mirror of the apartment
where I have been giving happy endings massages
My sister calls to say she found a lump in her right breast
The man I am seeing sends me roses
They are lined like legs with bruises
My next customer pulls out a gun
in the shape of a part of the female anatomy
I imagine my sister's husband going over her
breasts at night, some song
playing on the radio, the men I have loved
gathered at the window like moths
At work the next day, there are holes
in the roses the size of small mouths

—Kate Hall
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 10:44 AM
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1. ~
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 10:51 AM
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2. Ah, Tuesday. My best poster.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 12:25 PM
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3. My dear BlueIris!
What an interesting bunch of images this has...

Even though I don't fully understand the poem, still I like it!

Thank you...

:)
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 12:39 PM
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4. Well, I thought it was time for some poems that aren't as "concrete" as some of my others have been.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 02:13 PM
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5. Kick. Enjoy it, people,
tomorrow's poem makes this one look like a nursery rhyme.
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Westegg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 03:54 PM
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6. Excellent, excellent.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jan-16-08 07:43 PM
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7. Ah, Westegg. Hee. nt
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