Democratic Underground Latest Greatest Lobby Journals Search Options Help Login
Google

Looking for some good descriptions of swamp/marsh/bayou type terrain

Printer-friendly format Printer-friendly format
Printer-friendly format Email this thread to a friend
Printer-friendly format Bookmark this thread
This topic is archived.
Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:21 PM
Original message
Looking for some good descriptions of swamp/marsh/bayou type terrain
My D&D group is going to be headed into a marshy area tonight and I want to do a good job describing the scene to them. Sometimes, my descriptions/flavor text is where my rustiness as a DM shows up most. (in my old D&D group, the DM did a great job of setting up encounters in this type of terrain, but my memory is drawing a blank on how he set it up in game...)

It's a warm region - so, you could compare it to a Louisiana bayou or even the Everglades in Florida. Also, how prevalent is mist/fog in this type of environment?

I'm mostly looking for sight/scenery descriptions, as well as sounds. But, smell would be good as well. Not sure how much you really need "taste" description in D&D, other than something like, "you can almost taste the dank smell on your tongue" type of things.





Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
TrogL Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:30 PM
Response to Original message
1. It's wet
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
DS1 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:31 PM
Response to Original message
2. I think the single word "bog" does it for me every time
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
AllegroRondo Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:35 PM
Response to Original message
3. think wet
so wet, it feels like you're breathing water
so wet, the ground is mushy, and your footprints fill in with water
so wet, you're sweat cant even evaporate

and dont forget the bugs. huge clouds of gnats, mosquitos, and god knows what else, that think you're a buffet.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:55 PM
Response to Reply #3
6. thanks - that's the right idea
with each step, you boots sink a bit into the muddy wet ground, and each step brings a sucking sound as you pick your foot up again. With each step, your muddy footprint quickly fills with water and you know that traces of your passing will soon be gone, covered in a new layer of mud and slime.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
AngryAmish Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:38 PM
Response to Original message
4. swampy, marshy and bayouy
Edited on Fri Jan-25-08 03:38 PM by AngryAmish
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
lost-in-nj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 03:39 PM
Response to Original message
5. Stepping on the ground is like
walking on a sponge....

buoyant and wet
your foot makes a sploosh sound as you pull it up from the mud

lost

Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
TrogL Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:07 PM
Response to Original message
7. Don't forget the banjo player
but have him playing a dirge.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:15 PM
Response to Reply #7
10. I actually bought a $1 little wind chime at Michael's
that I have to create a little atmosphere. They'll hear a tinkling sound off in the distance, well sort of like those hollow wooden wind chimes you hear.

Only, they'll discover that the thing making the wind chime sound is hollowed-out bones fashioned into a crude wind chime that is obviously intended to mark somebody, or something's territory.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
DS1 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:11 PM
Response to Original message
8. wet and dark and dank and full of bugs as you trudge along
until you clear away some of the thinner saplings and realize you're standing at the base of Paris Hilton's clitoris.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:12 PM
Response to Reply #8
9. ROFL
:spray:

well, since one player in the group is a woman, I'm not sure how well that would go over.

Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
pitohui Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:18 PM
Response to Original message
11. i've seen a lot of mist/fog in lake martin and atchafalya cypress swamps
Edited on Fri Jan-25-08 04:20 PM by pitohui
but honestly the fog season is fall/winter/early spring in my opinion or maybe it's just that when it's really hot i'm not out there to see any mist

but i tend to think of mist/fog as more of the cooler time of year

you need a boat such as a flatboat or piroque, the "terrain" is not walkable in most places



Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:21 PM
Response to Reply #11
13. well, in the game
it is springtime.

so, some mist or fog could be possible, especially in the morning and at dusk, no?
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
pitohui Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:44 PM
Response to Reply #13
19. yes esp morning EOM
.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
EstimatedProphet Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:19 PM
Response to Original message
12. The ground shakes with each footstep
Small trees as far as 10 feet away tremble as you move. Everything becomes gray at arm's length.

Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
LanternWaste Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:23 PM
Response to Original message
14. Try Hounds of Baskervilles with Jeremy Brett.
Try Hounds of Baskervilles with Jeremy Brett for some inspiration. Nice depiction of bog lands...

(it's tonight-- never mind)

I didn't know people in Connecticut could play D&D :evilgrin:
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:28 PM
Response to Reply #14
15. not sure what you mean by that?
people in CT playing D&D?
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
LanternWaste Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:32 PM
Response to Reply #15
17. I had forgotten it's an inside joke.
I had forgotten it's an inside joke. it's almost a habit for me to say/write that.

When we used to play D&D and had an outsider sit in for a session or two, we'd ask where they were from and invariably end with "Oh, I didn't know the played D&D in _____" in a derisive voice.

Much like one would feign surprise and say, "Wow! I didn't know you guys already had cable TV in Oklahoma... good for you!!!" and pat them on the head.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NewJeffCT Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 06:04 PM
Response to Reply #17
24. ah, got it now
I understand.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Maraya1969 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:28 PM
Response to Original message
16. You can sense the presence of the alligator that is watching you.
And you wonder where the snakes around you are.




Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Westegg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:34 PM
Response to Original message
18. "Cryptically fluorescent" and it smells like...
...a gross of Pop 'N' Fresh muffins have been partially baked and had dumped on them the leftovers from last week's church-social green salad, which no one would say was all that fresh to begin with.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Jamastiene Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:47 PM
Response to Original message
20. That sounds like fun.
Edited on Fri Jan-25-08 04:50 PM by Jamastiene
I don't know of any D&D groups in my area any more.

I would include the mist just for better game play. Reduced visibility could come in handy for some players to excel while others need something to help them out too. It could help with dynamics.

Smells:
I'd use some of these words
earthen
leafy
compost
swamp gas
stench

Visuals:
mist, like you said
moon glow or moon light(that always adds to atmospheric descriptions especially if you talk about shadows)
shadows
silhouette (as in trees in silhouette in the moon light)
mossy
stone, stones, stony
squishy (walking through those types of areas sounds squishy)

Sounds:
frogs "singing" or chirping
bullfrogs (deep voices)
owls cackling, laughing maniacal laughter(some owls sound like raving lunatics in the night, no kidding) Here's a link so you can hear their mating call, it's crazy sounding
http://www.fcps.k12.va.us/StratfordLandingES/Ecology/mpages/barred_owl.htm

Check out their mating sounds and sound #7

Also, here are some sounds that you could describe without telling them it's owls
http://members.tripod.com/sasquatchsearch/sounds/barredowl1note2.mp3




Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:50 PM
Response to Original message
21. The water was bracken and muddy...
there were vines hanging from the cyprus trees... noises nearby making a splash as they entered the water.

The moon lit the swamp with an eerie glow.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
XemaSab Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 05:21 PM
Response to Reply #21
23. Brackish means part fresh, part salt.
Bracken is an upland fern. :P
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-26-08 03:57 PM
Response to Reply #23
27. i know but aren't some swamps bracken?
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NV Whino Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 04:53 PM
Response to Original message
22. Sucky.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
JustABozoOnThisBus Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 06:30 PM
Response to Original message
25. Miasmal - more of a "smell" thing
He shall be washed as white as snow,
By all the martyr'd virgins kist,
While the True Church remains below
Wrapt in the old miasmal mist.

from The Hippopotamus, T.S.Eliot
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Fire Walk With Me Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-25-08 06:34 PM
Response to Original message
26. ...
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
DU AdBot (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view 
this author's profile Click to add 
this author to your buddy list Click to add 
this author to your Ignore list Fri Apr 26th 2024, 05:34 AM
Response to Original message
Advertisements [?]
 Top

Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU

Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.1 Copyright 1997-2002 DCScripts.com
Software has been extensively modified by the DU administrators


Important Notices: By participating on this discussion board, visitors agree to abide by the rules outlined on our Rules page. Messages posted on the Democratic Underground Discussion Forums are the opinions of the individuals who post them, and do not necessarily represent the opinions of Democratic Underground, LLC.

Home  |  Discussion Forums  |  Journals |  Store  |  Donate

About DU  |  Contact Us  |  Privacy Policy

Got a message for Democratic Underground? Click here to send us a message.

© 2001 - 2011 Democratic Underground, LLC