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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 11:00 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 2/2/08
"Blue"

One day
suddenly
without warning
everyone in the world
turned blue
not the pale
washed-out blue
of a summer sky
or the gray-blue
of old silk
but full turquoise
bright and hard as
a Navajo stone
set in silver
at first there was a mass panic
governments fell
commerce collapsed
immigration officials went
into shock
and were found wandering along
fortified borders
singing snatches of old
Lawrence Welk tunes
on battlefields all across
the planet
blue soldiers
ran screaming from each other
no one knew who to shoot
no one knew who to hate
the enemy was suddenly
beatified
gorgeous and familiar
as the palm of one's own
hand
in Brazil
three abandoned children
from a cardboard favela
walked unrecognized
through the biggest shopping
mall in Rio
and were accidentally
presented with promotional balloons
in Berlin
five Turkish families
sat on benches in the Zoo
for most of the afternoon
unnoticed and undisturbed
in Miami
a Haitian cab driver
was inadvertently hired
to teach advanced French
at an exclusive
girls' school
as time passed,
the confusion deepened
landlords had to be sedated
real estate agents were found
curled in the fetal position
around For Sale signs
in Chicago alone
over 200 loan officers
attending a convention
at the airport Hilton
suddenly took Jesus as
their savior
but for lovers
blueness was a gift
the world around them
opened up
blossoming and blossoming
like a great, blue cornflower
innocent and strange
they lay in each others arms
blue lips to blue lips
blue breasts to blue breasts
making long, blue love
and when the blue nights
came down at last
and the blue sunsets
hovered over their beds
their blue laughter could be heard
as soft as silver bells
as they whispered to each other
those magic words:
azure
cobalt
indigo
lobelia
gentian
aqua.

—Mary Mackey
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 11:02 AM
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1. Ahhhhh.
:hug:

RL
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RainDog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 11:05 AM
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2. ..and BlueIris..
Edited on Sat Feb-02-08 11:06 AM by RainDog
I love the chain of incidents... reminds me the way Run Lola Run and Amelie played off the old chaos example of a butterfly flapping its wings in Brazil makes the Great Wall of China fall, or another more personal event.


edit because I need to preview because the words in my mind are faster than my fingers...
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ThomCat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 11:09 AM
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3. That is an awesome fantasy.
:)

I wouldn't mind being blue if it could be so.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 01:21 PM
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4. Kick.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 03:14 PM
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5. hmmmm
this one inspires me. Thanks.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 04:30 PM
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7. Aw, Tuesday is inspired!
Terrific!
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 11:37 PM
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9. inspired but not prolific
it may be a while :)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 03:35 PM
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6. My dear BlueIris...
Ahhhhhhhhh....

Beautiful!

Thank you...

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-02-08 08:04 PM
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8. Kick.
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