My newest poem...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

The opening line was spoken by someone Tuesday night at the open mic I went to...

And I thought, "What a great line! I see a poem emerging from this!"

This is not my usual work...

I do hope you like it...


Never piss off a woman poet

She has powers you cannot imagine

Worse than a voodoo doll

She will

Incarcerate your soul

In an Iron Maiden

And strut away laughing

While your soul screams

As it thrashes against the spikes


:scared:

[DarkTirade]

1. Okay, I'm recruiting you to write lyrics...

That was pretty frikkin' rock and roll right there. :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

3. My dear DarkTirade!

Wow!

You just made my day!

Do you realize that I am sixty-four years old?

Hey, this old dame has a kick in her yet!

Thank you!

:woohoo: :woohoo:

[DarkTirade]

15. Hmm... well, this is a little simple, but I think it works.

http://www.stickmanltd.com/practicesessions/womanpoet.mp3

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. Alas...I cannot get it to play!

:-(

[DarkTirade]

17. I'll try and convert it to something you can play in your browser.

:)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

18. Thanks!

I hope you can...

I really want to hear it!

:)

[DarkTirade]

19. 'k, try this.

http://www.stickmanltd.com/practicesessions/womanpoet.html

[CaliforniaPeggy]

20. It worked!

Oh my god!

That was great! You have a great voice!

I am truly honored...never has anyone used my lyrics for a song!

Thank you so much!

:bounce: :bounce:

[DarkTirade]

21. Sometimes I just pick up the guitar and stuff flows out. :)

But not so much with words, unfortunately. So a lot of my stuff ends up getting lost because I don't have anything to put it to, so I forget what I came up with. :P

[CaliforniaPeggy]

22. Well, you sounded great!

And....check your PM!

:hug:

[vixengrl]

2. My dear California Peggy!

That is a powerful and chilling poem with serious meaning.

I like it much!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear vixengrl!

I'm so glad you like it!

It is far, far removed from my normal romantic, mushy, sentimental stuff...

Thank you!

:woohoo: :woohoo:

[madinmaryland]

5. Wow.

:wow:

My dear California Peggy, that is much more intense that just dropping an "f"-bomb.

I promise to never say anything negative about you... not that i could.

:scared:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

9. My dear madinmaryland...

Oh, sweetie...not to worry!

I am really not like this...well, not very much, anyway!

You can say anything you want to, OK?

It is an intense poem...

Thank you...

:hug:

[Rising Phoenix]

6. I love it

Watch out for us women poets....GRRRRRR

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. My dear Rising Phoenix!

Glad you do!

Yeah, watch out for US!

Thank you...

:hug:

[UndertheOcean]

7. Amazing

Really Good.

:applause:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

11. My dear UndertheOcean!

Wow...

Thank you!

:hug:

[GoddessOfGuinness]

8. Dark Tirade's right...

I could imagine my son's metalesque band writing music to go with that...

Rock on, Peggy! :headbang:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

12. My dear GoddessOfGuinness!

How about that?

At my age...writing rock lyrics!

Thanks, sweetie...

So glad you like it!

:hug:

[Inchworm]

13. I love you Ms Peggy

:woohoo:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

14. My dear Inchworm!

Well, you know I love you too!

Aw....thanks...

:hug:

[emilyg]

23. I like it.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

24. Well, I thank you, my dear emilyg!

:hug:

[fizzgig]

25. yikes!

very vivid, peggy, it's fantastic

[CaliforniaPeggy]

26. My dear kagehime!

Oh, thanks, sweetie!

And, even better: DarkTirade has set it to music in #19...have a listen!

I don't know where my poetry comes from...

And maybe it's just as well that I don't! :scared:

[Blue_In_AK]

27. Wow, Peggy...

Who knew you had a "dark side"? You scare me.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

28. My dear Blue...

Everybody has a dark side, sweetie...

Even me...

Don't be scared, though...

It's not a major part of me...

Just a tiny bit...

I'm really the way you normally see me here...

:hug:

[UrbScotty]

29. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!

If you have all these power, then PROVE IT!

:evilgrin:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

30. My dear ih8thegop!

Lol!

Did I say I did? I think not!

I hope you enjoyed my little work, sweetie!

:evilgrin:

:rofl: