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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:17 AM
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I'm in a mischievous mood tonight...
I'm writing a poem...

It's called "The Sensuous Orange."

It's not done, not yet...

But I feel like teasing you a little...

So, here are the first two lines...

The orange is heavy in my hand; I want it in my mouth

Its skin is tough and dry, but I know that something wet and sweet lies within



Not to worry...I will post the entire poem when I'm done!

Enjoy...

:evilgrin:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:18 AM
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1. I'm already excited beyond words!
:evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:20 AM
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2. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six!
Oh baby...

Good.

:evilgrin:
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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:21 AM
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3. Are you channeling my wife?
:rofl:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:23 AM
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5. My dear Straight Story!
Um....I did have this weird phone call....

:rofl:
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S n o w b a l l Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:21 AM
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4. mmmm...nice teaser, Peg....
Love your poetry...especially the erotic ones.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:24 AM
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6. My dear Engi...
Glad you like it!

We'll see how erotic this one is, once I'm done...

Hope you won't be disappointed!

;-)
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barb162 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:26 AM
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7. Is this going to be like the beach scene from " From Here to Eternity"
I need a fan, quick.

Hi Peggy!!!!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:27 AM
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8. My dear barb162!
I don't know...it's not done yet!

We'll see what I can deliver...

Good to see you tonight, sweetie!

:hug:
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barb162 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:15 AM
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19. Why, thank you!
Maybe it'll end up with two oranges making out on the beach, oh my....
LOL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:17 AM
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20. I was just working on it ...
And I don't think the poem will be going that way!

I'm feeling pretty happy with it, though...

I think it will be pretty sensual...;)
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quip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:41 AM
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9. May I graphically show you how I feel about your poem so far?


Great start! :D :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:46 AM
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10. My dear temeah!
I love it!

How lucky for you to have just the perfect picture for my silly thread!

Glad you like it...so far!

You can believe that I was smiling as those first lines showed up in my head... ;)
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quip Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:51 AM
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11. hehe I look forward to reading the rest of the poem!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:54 AM
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13. Believe me...
I will post it when I'm through with it!

I'm nearly there now, but I know it needs to sit overnight so I can see it with fresh eyes tomorrow...

I will be busy tomorrow, but hopefully I'll finish it soon...

Thanks, sweetie!

:pals:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:53 AM
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12. I am eager to hear the rest of that!
I'm in a restless mood tonight (this early a.m. myself), myself, so I'll post some pics in a sec. One pic, as you will see, could be considered rather sensuous...in an odd way...

give me a couple of minutes!

:evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:56 AM
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15. My dear KC2!
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

And I'm eager to see your pics!

I love sensuous things...

I'll be here!

:evilgrin:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:09 AM
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17. Tell me what you see in that pic!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:15 AM
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18. The one with the worm?
It looks like a nude torso, from the back...

What do I win?

Nice pics!

:evilgrin:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:23 AM
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21. Yep
What do you win?

I'll post an extra pic, just for you: :hi:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:26 AM
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22. How pretty this one is!
Is this in your yard?

Very nice...

I love irises!

:hi:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 01:27 AM
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23. No, that is not my yard..
It is a restored Historic home in our community, though.

I love irises too! :D :hi:
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Name removed Donating Member (0 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:55 AM
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 12:59 AM
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16. My dear Breeze54!
Now that's a weird pic...there's something wrong with him...

:wtf: is right!


I do have a mischievous side...now you've seen it!

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Skittles Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 04:29 AM
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24. I WILL KICK YO' MISCHIEVIOUS ASS
THEM'S MY FAVORITE KIND
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:29 AM
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27. My dear Skittles!
Why, thank you!

I look forward to it!

ROFLMAO!

:rofl:
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UrbScotty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 10:51 AM
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25. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!
Edited on Sun Apr-13-08 10:52 AM by ih8thegop
I am flattered that you would write a poem about me! :evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:30 AM
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28. My dear ih8thegop!
Who said it's about you, baby?

:evilgrin:
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UrbScotty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:50 PM
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42. You implied it.
:-)
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DeposeTheBoyKing Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:26 AM
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26. You're always in a mischievous mood CP . . .
This is really Bullwinkle925 writing under DeposeTheBoyKing's nom de plume since I can't remember my password.

aarrrrghhhhhh.


I'm looking forward to *the rest of the story* . . .

hugs - me
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:33 AM
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29. My dear Bullwinkle925!
Is it really you?

Nah, I know it's you!

Thanks, sweetie...

And I am looking forward to delivering the rest of the story to you!

Hugs back atcha! :hug:
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DeposeTheBoyKing Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 07:42 PM
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30. Can you write something called "The Screaming Waffle?"
Our waffle iron makes a screaming sound when we push its lid down - I always said I should start a blog called "The Screaming Waffle." Maybe you can write a poem based on that? You're creative - I know you can do it!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 08:36 PM
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32. My dear DeposeTheBoyKing!
Uh...

Well...

I probably could!

But do I want to?


Fraid not! I have to be inspired, and that just doesn't do it, sorry!:yoiks:
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SalmonChantedEvening Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 07:46 PM
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31. No produce shopping for me now...
:evilgrin:

Hiya California Peggy!! :hug: :loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 08:38 PM
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33. My dear SalmonChantedEvening!
Why ever not???:evilgrin:

Are you afraid of oranges now?

:rofl:


Nice to see you tonight, sweetie! :loveya: :hug:
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blondie58 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:17 PM
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34. my dear C-Peg! I wouldn't call this mischievous
it is more like succinctly sensual or perhaps creatively carnal? Or maybe rotundly randy?

Can't wait to hear the rest of it- have you finished it yet?
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:42 PM
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37. My dear blondie58!
Well, I was feeling mischievous!

You'll have to judge the poem on its own merits, once I post it...

And yes, it's done...

But I can't post it tonight...

I can't be here, so it'll have to wait, sorry!

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SalmonChantedEvening Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:22 PM
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35. A pleasure as always Peggy
I fear no produce! lol

Only my inability to stop myself from doing improv in the supermarket. ;)

:hug: :loveya:
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Redstone Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:35 PM
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36. Ah, the skin might be dry, but it ought not to be tough in your allegorical sense (or
should that be some other sense in the formal sense of word / phrase senses, Christ, I don't know)?

Tough skin in in that sense might indicate calluses, which the same I've never had, nor even heard of anyone having, in that, well, I won't say location, in deference to DU rules, but not at least in that sense.

And that's all I have to say.

Redstone
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:47 PM
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39. My dear Redstone...
Ah, sweetie, you're being too literal...

It will all become much clearer, once I post the finished work!

Nope, and I never heard of calluses there, either, god forbid!

The poem is full of metaphors...
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RainDog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:45 PM
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38. I like those lines, c.p.
more, please!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:50 PM
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40. My dear RainDog...
Glad you like them, sweetie...

There will be more, trust me!

I'm not sure just when, though...

We have a couple of hours of John Adams to watch tonight, and I like to be around whenever I post a thread, so I can talk to my friends...

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Dr. Strange Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 10:45 PM
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41. Have you been hanging around temeah?
Those lines are dripping with the influence of temeah. (Although he probably would have used grapefruit.)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:56 PM
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43. My dear DuStrange!
Nope, the idea for this one came from my teacher...

She suggested it, and I ran with it...

And I'm going to post it NOW!

:bounce: :bounce:
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Brigid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 11:57 PM
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44. Naughty CaliforniaPeggy!
Did you make up another batch of those brownies? And maybe add something that isn't in the directions? :evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-14-08 12:09 AM
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45. My dear Brigid!
Nope, no marijuana brownies for me!

And my poem is now up, for you to read in all its glory...:evilgrin:
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