Poem to my perfect woman

[AteAlien]

(seems there are poetry threads wandering about, so what do you think of mine? I just emailed it to my perfect woman. I am NOT a poetry writer)


From dreams that were awakened
when I saw you for the second lifetime
when fate smiled again on my heart
came additions to meanings
bringing
more love than this man
would be able to express
in the longest of lifetimes
mingling
with hope that wraps itself
around my memories
of you with a loving look
and longing soul
tingling
with desire that sees
these awaking dreams
and attempts to touch your desires
dreaming of adding something
memorable
to your heart