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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:09 PM
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Ah, it has been awhile...My newest poem...
Enjoy!

Ponderous hips move over me

Ponderous hands grip my limbs

Your eyes smile into my face

While you take me where I ‘ve never been.


I gasp as you probe me

Your tongue is magic

I twist in your arms

As you warm my skin

With your breath, your kiss


Your kisses reach into me

They nourish us

And we become whole inside each other


The sky darkens with thudding clouds

The trees thrash in the rising wind

But I no longer care

For you shelter me


The rain pelts us

We don’t feel it

The grass dampens

But our love heats the ground

And far, far below

our wild souls’ howling

Can be heard.


Take me there, again

I beg you...



Give me your strength

Let me hide beneath your bones

And I will give you my grace, my rhythm...

My swaying hips and my smile

You will be powerless under my enchantment


Let the graying rains pour down on us



We will laugh

While we love one another


Let the ocean flood our shores

We will float away

And our souls will watch with joy


We will sail over the world

And warm it with our loving


We are caught in the snare

Of loving one another


We crawled from the primordial ooze

Long ago

We did not know

Who we were then


But our souls pursued us

Till our eyes met

And across the story of the planet

We came together

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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:15 PM
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1. Wow!
Glad I stopped by the Lounge just now!

This is my favorite part, Peggy:

And far, far below

our wild souls’ howling

Can be heard.



:yourock: :applause: :loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:30 PM
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3. My dear KC2!
Oh, sweetie, I'm so glad you came by the Lounge too!

I've been working on this one for about a week now, and I think it's OK...

Thank you...

:hug:
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:31 PM
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5. The girl's good
And I hate hate hate her! She writes better poetry than me and she just started and I've been doing it for years. I even had some of it published. It ain't fair! How can she be so good naturally when I had to work so hard? I hate her.

(I do love her writing, but I don't hate her. She's a good friend and I love her to death. Just a little jealous, though :) )

Khash.

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:34 PM
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8. My dear Khash!
Oh, sweetie...

I'm thrilled to have you here in my thread, even if you aren't talking to me...

Thank you...

I'm going to read this one tomorrow night at the open mic for the Poetry Club...

I'm sorry you're jealous, baby...

:hug:

And I'll have you know this one didn't just roll out of me all at once...

This one was more like giving birth...

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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:41 PM
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12. Yeah I know it ain't easy
You just make it look like it is.

Cool about the Poetry Club. Have fun, I'm sure it'll be a success.

And I'm not not talking to you! As if!

Love you always,
Khash.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:44 PM
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14. Back atcha, sweetie...
Back atcha...

Love you too...

:hug:
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UrbScotty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:27 PM
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2. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!
Hot, Hot, HOT!

:D
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:31 PM
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4. My dear ih8thegop!
Good...

Thank you, sweetie!

:hug:
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:31 PM
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6. ... I'll be in my bunk.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:35 PM
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9. My dear DarkTirade...
Thank you...

Have fun!

:hug:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:33 PM
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7. LOCKING! No sex threads!
:evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:37 PM
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10. My dear KitchenWitch!
Heh...

This is an erotic poem, NOT a sex thread!

And it's not even graphic, fer cryin' out loud...

:P


I do hope you liked it!
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Bullwinkle925 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:40 PM
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11. i'll let you know what i think of this . . .
as soon as i get out of my cold shower!!


my-oh-my! you go girl!!


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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:43 PM
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13. My dear Bullwinkle925!
Wow....

My guess is that you like it!

I'm glad you did, sweetie...

Thank you!

And thanks for the great graphic!

:hug:
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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:51 PM
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15. This type of porn should me moved to the lounge
Oh wait... :rofl:

Great poem as usual my friend.

Would that my night had been as bad as it had or I would have enjoyed it even more. I will re-read it tomorrow.

My favorite lines:

We will laugh

While we love one another

--Says a lot to me.

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:57 PM
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17. My dear Straight Story!
Hey! I keep telling you guys that this isn't porn! Sheesh...:eyes:

You trying to get my thread locked???


Glad you enjoyed it ...

And I'm sure you will enjoy it even more tomorrow...

:hug:

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emilyg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:54 PM
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16. Peggy
This got me so excited I spilled my Gatorade.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-19-08 11:59 PM
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18. My dear emilyg!
Oh, no!

I'm so sorry!

Can you ever forgive me?


Did the spill help cool you down?


Thanks, sweetie...

:hug:
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emilyg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:31 AM
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22. I didn't mind. Your poem
brought back lovely memories.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:39 AM
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24. Ah, I am glad for that...
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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:02 AM
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19. So you switched from the Falcons to the braves eh?
I see them going just as far.... :rofl:

How your doing emily? Long time no see (though I do see you from time to time in that hell hole we call GDP...).

Maybe someday soon we can chat or share a phone call :)
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emilyg Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:33 AM
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23. I roll with the seasons and keep hoping.
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puerco-bellies Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:17 AM
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20. Very cool Miss CP
I definitely want to get this one on tape.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:19 AM
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21. My dear puerco-bellies!
Oh, thank you!

I would love to have this one recorded!

I know everyone here would love it...

You are a sweetheart...

:hug:
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Parche Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 12:19 PM
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25. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy
WOW

:hi: :hug: :hug:








"The curious mind cannot be chained. It is a free mind, endlessly searching for the greater freedom that must eventually make every living being joyfully complete within himself therefore at peace with himself and his neighbors."
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-20-08 01:12 PM
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26. My dear Parche!
Ah, thank you, sweetie!

:hug:
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