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AteAlien Donating Member (217 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-28-08 02:00 AM
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So I'm a lousy poet who didn't know it!
and here I am reading on this site spending a lot of time, so here goes. She woke up the words in me.

they are
coming together
creating new energy meant for them
alone to share
and feel the wonder of
from a soft and hesitant touch
and eyes that need no shading
begins
a journey through seeming coincidence
and chance
but traveling
without worry
toward destiny
Imparting a warmth throughout their hearts
creating a storm of passion
that will wander as a river
without need for a
memory of time
they are coming together
learning they are creating
and enjoying with unshaded hearts
themselves
coming together
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-28-08 06:06 AM
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1. I like it
Here's one of mine:

I am soon to be smoke
As I walk into the fire
I say goodbye
To my family
To my friends
To my lover
But you were never
My family, my friends, my lover
So I walk into the fire
Soon to be smoke

Khash.
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