The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 6/17/2008)

[RetroLounge]

Summer Nocturne

        Let us love this distance, since those
        who do not love each other are
        not separated. -Simone Weil

Night without you, and the dog barking at the silence,
no doubt at what's in the silence,
a deer perhaps pruning the rhododendron
or that raccoon with its brilliant fingers
testing the garbage can lid by the shed.

Night I've chosen a book to help me think
about the long that's in longing, "the space across
which desire reaches." Night that finally needs music
to quiet the dog and whatever enormous animal
night itself is, appetite without limit.

Since I seem to want to be hurt a little,
it's Stan Getz and "It Never Entered My Mind,"
and to back him up Johnnie Walker Black
coming down now from the cabinet to sing
of its twelve lonely years in the dark.

Night of small revelations, night of odd comfort.
Starting to love this distance.
Starting to feel how present you are in it.

Stephen Dunn


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:hi:

RL

[xchrom]

1. ...

Night I've chosen a book to help me think
about the long that's in longing, "the space across
which desire reaches." Night that finally needs music
to quiet the dog and whatever enormous animal
night itself is, appetite without limit.

[RetroLounge]

3. Thank you for the reply...

:hug:

RL

[RetroLounge]

2. Well, if THIS poem only gets one response...

I fail to see the point anymore.

:shrug:

RL

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear Retro...

Sorry, sweetie...

I meant to look for your poem earlier, and then I got busy...

And all I can say is WOW...

This is so beautiful, so damn hurtful, so damn accurate!

Especially this stanza:

...Night I've chosen a book to help me think
about the long that's in longing, "the space across
which desire reaches." Night that finally needs music
to quiet the dog and whatever enormous animal
night itself is, appetite without limit...

It's perfect, and I thank you for your efforts!

:hug:

[RetroLounge]

5. Thank you

:hi:

RL