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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 01:03 AM
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"When All the World's Asleep"--tonight's poem from the open mic...

When all the world�s asleep
And you are peacefully dreaming
Then
I will come out of the dark

I will entwine myself around you
I will touch you everywhere

Then you will know me
And what brings me there

My immortal soul will join yours
My smile will shine through your life
My kisses will set you on fire
My kisses on your wide, generous mouth

You will know my sweet, sweet loving
As the night rolls away from us

By the time the dawn lights your window
You will have answers to the questions
You did not know
You had.

For you will love me forever
As I come
Out of the dark

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NYC_SKP

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Wed Apr-01-09 01:07 AM
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1. Oh my...

That's very sensuous, and much more, lovely! :hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 01:10 AM
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2. My dear NYC_SKP...

Thanks, sweetie!

One of these days, I'll read it to you, OK?

This one has been percolating for some time...

;)

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NYC_SKP

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Wed Apr-01-09 01:19 AM
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5. That would be so nice.

You have such a way with words, what a splendid gift!

Nitey nite!

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seaker

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Wed Apr-01-09 01:11 AM
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3. For some reason

The word rapture is evoked in reading your poem..
Thank you for your generosity.:hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 01:16 AM
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4. My dear seaker...

Hmmm...rapture. I'm glad it evokes that word for you!

And you know, I have to write these babies down. If I don't, they drive me crazy, and I'm already crazy enough...

So, I'm not really being generous. I'm just trying to save my mind...

Thanks, sweetie...:hug:

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seaker

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Wed Apr-01-09 07:45 PM
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16. Your 'babies'

Have given me pause and pleasure. Thank you.
:hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 11:33 AM
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6. .

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ccharles000

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Wed Apr-01-09 11:36 AM
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7. lovely

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 11:40 AM
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8. My dear ccharles000...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

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Wed Apr-01-09 11:40 AM
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9. Deleted sub-thread

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Wed Apr-01-09 05:24 PM
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10. Ah, yes ...

Sensuous and scrumptious!

(The only problem with your poetry of late is that after I finish reading it, I have an irresistible urge to smoke a cigarette!)

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 05:50 PM
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13. LOL!

Well, sweetie...I would encourage you to resist smoking one! They're bad for you, you know...;)

I thank you!

And you know why...

:hug:

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DarkTirade

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Wed Apr-01-09 05:25 PM
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11. I know rec'ing lounge threads doesn't do anything...

but I still had to rec this one. :)

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 05:51 PM
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14. My dear DarkTirade!

That was a lovely and thoughtful thing you did...

Thank you, sweetie...:hug:

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SalmonChantedEvening

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Wed Apr-01-09 05:44 PM
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12. A reason to dream.

And to love the dark.

Wonderfully done Peggy.

:applause: :yourock: :loveya:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 05:52 PM
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15. My dear SalmonChantedEvening!

What a bright bit of sunshine you are!

Thank you so much, sweetie...:loveya: :hug:

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Iggo

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Wed Apr-01-09 07:51 PM
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17. Wow!

Daaaang, Peggy!

:blush:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:25 PM
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19. My dear Iggo!

Why, thank you, sweetie!

Glad you enjoyed it...:hug:

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Haole Girl

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:25 PM
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18. Very pretty

:-)

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:26 PM
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20. My dear Haole Girl!

Pretty? OK! I'll take it!

Thanks, sweetie!

:hug:

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Haole Girl

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:29 PM
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21. I'm sorry if my words aren't the best tonight

It was a trying day (to put it mildly) at work today & I'm a little tired at the moment. :hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:31 PM
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22. I admit, it did startle me a bit...

And I'm a little gun-shy after what happened earlier...(deleted subthread)

No worries, sweetie, and I'm sorry about your trying day...:hug:

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Haole Girl

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:38 PM
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23. Glad a missed the deleted subthread

I really liked your poem, Peggy. Next time I'll choose my words more carefully. :hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 08:44 PM
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24. Hope tomorrow is a better day for you...

:hug:

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EastTennesseeDem

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Wed Apr-01-09 10:05 PM
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27. I thought you missed the subthread

and I'm sorry you had to see it. Douchebaggery to the extreme to a complete sweetheart.

I think you're a rare talent.

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 10:55 PM
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28. My dear EastTennesseeDem!

No worries...it was most instructive, seeing it...

Thank you for your very kind words!

:hug:

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knowbody0

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Wed Apr-01-09 09:57 PM
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25. way beautiful, Peggy

you have stimulated my own memory bank. thank you

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 10:56 PM
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29. My dear knowbody0...

Ah, again...

I'm so glad, sweetie...

:hug:

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lightningandsnow

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Wed Apr-01-09 09:58 PM
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26. Gorgeous.

Edited on Wed Apr-01-09 10:02 PM by lightningandsnow

By the way, no sex threads! :P

:hug:

On edit: how the hell did we manage to get a deleted sub-thread in there?

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 10:57 PM
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30. My dear lightningandsnow!

Ha!

Thank you!

This, my dear, is art...

I will PM you the details...

:hug:

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BarenakedLady

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Wed Apr-01-09 11:05 PM
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31. Very beautiful

:D

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Wed Apr-01-09 11:08 PM
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32. My dear BarenakedLady!

Ah, thank you...

I'm so glad you find it so!

:D

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