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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 07:05 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 4/1/09 (The single greatest poem I have ever read.)
"The Bony Ribs of Adam"

I left the bony ribs of Adam
for the fruit
of my own
personal desire

Its scent still heavy
upon my flesh
my absence still
thorn
to his side

But now how my belly
hollows and aches
craving seed
craving kisses
but outside the road hisses

and I find myself
packing girlishness
in an old leather bag

love stepping lightly
away from the door

~Jewel
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Lyric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 07:43 AM
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1. April Fool's!
:hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 04:00 PM
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5. Gosh, no! This is simply the single most profound poem ever written in the English language.
I think Jewel is right up there with Sharon Olds, Keats, and Shakespeare.
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 07:54 AM
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2. ...
But who will say-hee-ayve your soul, BlueIris?
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 08:20 AM
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3. Is this Jewel, the singer who married a cowboy?
:donut: :hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 04:01 PM
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6. How dare you trivialize Jewel's accomplished life?!
Dead to me. Totally dead to me.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 10:15 PM
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8. ~
Edited on Wed Apr-01-09 10:16 PM by Tuesday Afternoon
:D
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 11:29 AM
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4. My dear BlueIris!
I LOVE it!

Wonderful...

Thank you!

:hi:

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-01-09 04:45 PM
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7. Kick. Because the depth and profundity of this poem still brings me to tears each time I read it.
It's making me cry even now. A lot.
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