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HereSince1628 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-22-10 04:21 PM
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Criterion 1:
The Sensation of Abandonment

There was no call nor warning
just focused pressure
as the hook drove thru the belly wall
to snare a loop of guts.
And then, an aching,
emtpying, disappointment
beyond the meaning of the screams.
A spectacle of impending doom
birthed from its warm and wet domain.



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HereSince1628 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-22-10 05:24 PM
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1. Oh, joy, I can't spell. n/t
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