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DearAbby

(12,461 posts)
Sun Jul 29, 2012, 01:22 AM Jul 2012

Cranky Old Man

I found this on face book, and wanted to share it.

Remember this poem when you next meet an older person who you might brush aside without looking at the young soul within. We will all, one day, be there, too!

When an old man died in the geriatric ward of a nursing home in an Australian country town, it was believed that he had nothing left of any value.
Later, when the nurses were going through his meagre possessions, They found this poem. Its quality and content so impressed the staff that copies were made and distributed to every nurse in the hospital.

One nurse took her copy to Melbourne. The old man's sole bequest to posterity has since appeared in the Christmas editions of magazines around the country and appearing in mags for Mental Health. A slide presentation has also been made based on his simple, but eloquent, poem.

And this old man, with nothing left to give to the world, is now the author of this 'anonymous' poem winging across the Internet.

Cranky Old Man

What do you see nurses? . . .. . .What do you see?
What are you thinking .. . when you're looking at me?
A cranky old man, . . . . . .not very wise,
Uncertain of habit .. . . . . . . .. with faraway eyes?
Who dribbles his food .. . ... . . and makes no reply.
When you say in a loud voice . .'I do wish you'd try!'
Who seems not to notice . . .the things that you do.
And forever is losing . . . . . .. . . A sock or shoe?
Who, resisting or not . . . ... lets you do as you will,
With bathing and feeding . . . .The long day to fill?
Is that what you're thinking?. .Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes, nurse .you're not looking at me.
I'll tell you who I am . . . . .. As I sit here so still,
As I do at your bidding, .. . . . as I eat at your will.
I'm a small child of Ten . .with a father and mother,
Brothers and sisters .. . . .. . who love one another
A young boy of Sixteen . . . .. with wings on his feet
Dreaming that soon now . . .. . . a lover he'll meet.
A groom soon at Twenty . . . ..my heart gives a leap.
Remembering, the vows .. .. .that I promised to keep.
At Twenty-Five, now . . . . .I have young of my own.
Who need me to guide . . . And a secure happy home.
A man of Thirty . .. . . . . My young now grown fast,
Bound to each other . . .. With ties that should last.
At Forty, my young sons .. .have grown and are gone,
But my woman is beside me . . to see I don't mourn.
At Fifty, once more, .. ...Babies play 'round my knee,
Again, we know children . . . . My loved one and me.
Dark days are upon me . . . . My wife is now dead.
I look at the future ... . . . . I shudder with dread.
For my young are all rearing .. . . young of their own.
And I think of the years . . . And the love that I've known.
I'm now an old man . . . . . . .. and nature is cruel.
It's jest to make old age . . . . . . . look like a fool.
The body, it crumbles .. .. . grace and vigour, depart.
There is now a stone . . . where I once had a heart.
But inside this old carcass . A young man still dwells,
And now and again . . . . . my battered heart swells
I remember the joys . . . . .. . I remember the pain.
And I'm loving and living . . . . . . . life over again.
I think of the years, all too few . . .. gone too fast.
And accept the stark fact . . . that nothing can last.
So open your eyes, people .. . . . .. . . open and see.
Not a cranky old man .
Look closer . . . . see .. .. . .. .... . ME!!



PLEASE SHARE THIS POEM (originally by Phyllis McCormack; adapted by Dave Griffith)

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Cranky Old Man (Original Post) DearAbby Jul 2012 OP
very nice KT2000 Jul 2012 #1
reminded me d_r Jul 2012 #2
Hello In There rug Jul 2012 #3
volunteers are so badly needed at these places. As much as Nurses would like to do this - Tuesday Afternoon Jul 2012 #4
I think the credits are incomplete. LWolf Jul 2012 #5

Tuesday Afternoon

(56,912 posts)
4. volunteers are so badly needed at these places. As much as Nurses would like to do this -
Sun Jul 29, 2012, 10:13 AM
Jul 2012

Last edited Mon Jul 30, 2012, 09:58 PM - Edit history (1)

they rarely have the time. Sad, really.

LWolf

(46,179 posts)
5. I think the credits are incomplete.
Sun Jul 29, 2012, 12:23 PM
Jul 2012

It should probably say "originally by Bill Martin; adapted by Phyllis McCormack and Dave Griffith.)

It's well adapted though. I have the job of getting this message across to my adolescent grandson concerning my mother, his great-grandmother.

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