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DFW

(54,369 posts)
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 06:51 PM Jan 2015

If I had paid someone to do a review of my book, it wouldn't have been THIS good

There was a nice comment on Amazon from none other than Norm Ornstein, "Washington's most quoted pundit," but I have no idea who this was. If you are someone on DU, my humblest gratitude. If not, maybe a few more of you will be inspired to check it ("The Time Cellar&quot out:

As a fan of time travel stories I never thought I'd ever find a novel that could rival the classic "Time and Again" by Jack Finney. I stand corrected.

I can't compare the two stories since they are so very different in nature, but for sheer enjoyment as well as thought-provoking wonder, "The Time Cellar" is quite simply a fantastic companion to Finney.

Which is as it should be; I've seen some stories that hew too closely to Finney's model. It's a treat to read a book with an entirely different approach, but no less excitement and equal plausibility. Every permutation of the time travel paradox is addressed, often brilliantly.

The writing is delightful, with a casual tone that only a very skilled wordsmith could pull off so successfully. Like a talented dancer, (DFW) makes it look easy. But the more you read, the more you realize how hard it really is to write so well, with so many subtle hints of things to come. I was also impressed with how artfully he integrated impeccable French with translations of such dialog so that it seemed all the more real, without becoming awkward. It all flows together.

It's a book which I quite literally could not put down. I read it in one sitting, and was very sorry when I reached the end. I would have loved for it to go on for several hundred more pages. I'm glad I bought it as a hard-copy, this is a book I intend to re-read often in coming years.

I couldn't recommend this more highly. (I've already started shipping off copies to my friends!)
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It's really fascinating to me--some people like the time travel parts, some like the collecting references, some liked the romance subplot, some liked the small bits of social commentary, and, so far, at least, nobody DIDN'T like it (or if they hated it, they had pity enough on me not to say so).

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If I had paid someone to do a review of my book, it wouldn't have been THIS good (Original Post) DFW Jan 2015 OP
Hey that's awesome DFW! lovemydog Jan 2015 #1
Happy New Year back! DFW Jan 2015 #2
Wow, congratulations! TuxedoKat Jan 2015 #3
I hope you like mine as much as this one person did! DFW Jan 2015 #4
I'll let you know TuxedoKat Jan 2015 #10
Thanks for the heads up, I love Time Travel stories. MicaelS Jan 2015 #5
I hope I don't let you down. DFW Jan 2015 #13
Wow! That's great! redwitch Jan 2015 #6
Thanks! Let me know how you like it. DFW Jan 2015 #14
Rivals Jack Finney's TIME AND AGAIN? That is high praise indeed! 1monster Jan 2015 #7
I wasn't aware of Finney before DFW Jan 2015 #21
Jack Finney wrote "The Body Snatchers" Lionel Mandrake Jan 2015 #40
The only pods I approach without caution: DFW Jan 2015 #41
Holy cow! I didn't know you were a writer! MannyGoldstein Jan 2015 #8
It's not an easy task to complete DFW Jan 2015 #12
bookmarked daleanime Jan 2015 #9
You can't make it a priority if cash is tight DFW Jan 2015 #11
It won't be, but books are fairly high on my priority list... daleanime Jan 2015 #27
Right on!! OrwellwasRight Jan 2015 #15
Super! Congratulations! oldandhappy Jan 2015 #16
I read it last week and I recommend it to my fellow DUers, too. vanlassie Jan 2015 #17
Thanks vanlassie! DFW Jan 2015 #22
any plans for an Audible version? corkhead Jan 2015 #18
I know your dilemma only too well DFW Jan 2015 #19
Wine is one of the most important things in my life corkhead Jan 2015 #20
I'd be interested to hear your opinion DFW Jan 2015 #23
"winos" corkhead Jan 2015 #24
Definitely easier to spell, anyway n/t DFW Jan 2015 #29
Congrats! Here's a song for you: panader0 Jan 2015 #25
In my fantsies, when my book is a hit film, here's the song I want to run during the closing credits DFW Jan 2015 #31
We have another author here too: nolabear panader0 Jan 2015 #26
+1 daleanime Jan 2015 #28
By all means! DFW Jan 2015 #30
Congratulations! That's really awesome! n/t DebJ Jan 2015 #32
Congratulations, DFW !! Tuesday Afternoon Jan 2015 #33
Just bought Kindle version, no longer wondering pnwest Jan 2015 #34
Stan Lee commented no less, cool. denbot Jan 2015 #35
A couple of reasons for choosing L.A. DFW Jan 2015 #36
Good enough. denbot Jan 2015 #37
Well done! LeftishBrit Jan 2015 #38
Thanks, and cheers! DFW Jan 2015 #39
I'll try and get hold of it; I like time travel books, and this one sound very interesting. LeftishBrit Jan 2015 #45
"Time and Again" was magic IDemo Jan 2015 #42
I hope I don't let you down DFW Jan 2015 #43
To all who are considering the Kindle version DFW Jan 2015 #44
Alright, I'll check it out. Xyzse Jan 2015 #46
Officially "The Time Cellar" DFW Jan 2015 #47
Downloaded it, read it, enjoyed it! pnwest Feb 2015 #48
That's a relief! DFW Feb 2015 #49

lovemydog

(11,833 posts)
1. Hey that's awesome DFW!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 07:01 PM
Jan 2015

So cool getting a positive review from someone who clearly read it.

Happy new year.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
2. Happy New Year back!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 07:13 PM
Jan 2015

Yeah, I was blown away by that. I know Norm had read it, too, but I know him, whereas the author of this review is completely unknown to me, so I was really flattered by this review. Now all I have to do is figure out how to get 10,000 more people to read it and have the same impression!

TuxedoKat

(3,818 posts)
3. Wow, congratulations!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 07:20 PM
Jan 2015

I love time travel stories. I'd like to read both books, yours and the other one too. Thanks for sharing.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
4. I hope you like mine as much as this one person did!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 07:54 PM
Jan 2015

In all modesty, most people who read it do like it. It's just not easy to get people to notice it.

TuxedoKat

(3,818 posts)
10. I'll let you know
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 10:03 PM
Jan 2015

I was just reading about it on amazon and will order it soon. Sounds very intriguing!

MicaelS

(8,747 posts)
5. Thanks for the heads up, I love Time Travel stories.
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 08:50 PM
Jan 2015

Added the paperback to my cart for my next Amazon shipment.

redwitch

(14,944 posts)
6. Wow! That's great!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 09:04 PM
Jan 2015

I too love time travel stories, will add this to my list to buy son. Congratulations!

1monster

(11,012 posts)
7. Rivals Jack Finney's TIME AND AGAIN? That is high praise indeed!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 09:11 PM
Jan 2015

I'm going to check it out ASAP.
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For anyone not familiar with Jack Finney's work, check out his short story "Contents of a Dead Man's Pocket" @ http://www.is.wayne.edu/MNISSANI/20302005/Deadman.htm

Meanwhile, I'm off to see if I can find THE TIME CELLAR in a Nook book format.

Congratulations DFW for earning such an excellent review.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
21. I wasn't aware of Finney before
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 10:27 AM
Jan 2015

But it seems that the comparison is high praise, indeed. I was very flattered when I found out.

Lionel Mandrake

(4,076 posts)
40. Jack Finney wrote "The Body Snatchers"
Mon Jan 5, 2015, 12:04 AM
Jan 2015

on which the classic movie "Invasion of the Body Snatchers" (1956) and three (!) remakes were based.

If you ever see a great big pod, you'd better not go to sleep.

Congratulations on the favorable review by a reader with good taste.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
41. The only pods I approach without caution:
Mon Jan 5, 2015, 01:07 AM
Jan 2015

They are the ones with snow peas in them. Even pods of humpback whales are given plenty of space. I see them like moving vans: they do wonderful things, but they are a LOT bigger than I am, so when they move, I don't want to be anywhere where they might crush me by accident!

 

MannyGoldstein

(34,589 posts)
8. Holy cow! I didn't know you were a writer!
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 09:25 PM
Jan 2015

Congratulations, I'll have to check it out!

I'm finishing up a book now, my second, but it's non-fiction -- nothing cool or fun like time travel, wine, and coins. Hard, hard work!

DFW

(54,369 posts)
12. It's not an easy task to complete
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 11:44 PM
Jan 2015

About five years ago, I was having lunch with Stan Lee in L.A., and he said I really should go ahead with my idea. I know nothing about wine, so I figured I'd never bore anyone with more details than a reader could safely swallow. But I have enough respect for Stan's instinct. If he had thought my idea was a bust, he would have said so.

One review said "The author's passion for fine wines shines through as he uses all of the senses to describe setting." What pompous bullshit. I never touch the stuff and have no passion for it whatsoever. At least I must have been somewhat convincing, and creating a dialog between a retired (year 1818) Thomas Jefferson and a somewhat politically aware thirty-something in southern California in 2010 was more fun than you can imagine.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
11. You can't make it a priority if cash is tight
Sat Jan 3, 2015, 11:13 PM
Jan 2015

Do me a favor and wait until it's not an issue, OK?

daleanime

(17,796 posts)
27. It won't be, but books are fairly high on my priority list...
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 11:59 AM
Jan 2015

but to be honest I may be bugging the library first, I get the feeling that my buy list is going to be pretty exclusive.

vanlassie

(5,670 posts)
17. I read it last week and I recommend it to my fellow DUers, too.
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 02:03 AM
Jan 2015

It was a fun read, and I was intrigued by the time travel aspect- not a genre I would typically read. But DFW knows how to give attention to detail, and created a real page turner towards the end! I'm still thinking about it and that alone makes me recommend a book.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
22. Thanks vanlassie!
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 10:29 AM
Jan 2015

I value comments like that from DU friends as much as I do from the VIPs quoted on the cover!

corkhead

(6,119 posts)
18. any plans for an Audible version?
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 09:31 AM
Jan 2015

these days, the only time I seem to be able to allot to "reading" is while I am driving to and from work each day

Congrats, the topics you chose for your book are all of interest to me. I look forward to "reading" it, one way or another.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
19. I know your dilemma only too well
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 09:45 AM
Jan 2015

There are some books my wife and both want to "hear," and the only time we have is on long drives. The only trouble is, when are we on long drives together? Answer--about 4 times a year. Two hours to her mom and back from our home near Düsseldorf, and two times three hours from Boston to the tip of Cape Cod in the summer when we come for summer vacation.

The topics in the book are all of interest to me, too, except for wine. I know nothing at all about that except what I was able to find out by asking people I know and internet research. That's why I made it a central theme. I knew I would never bore a reader with an overabundance of expertise because I had none. As for some of the more colorful characters, I used my imagination and linguistic knowledge to try to make them real. In Dallas, there are enough Hispanics to allow me to come up with my genius Guatemalteca with relatively little stretch. Granted, making her fluent in Cantonese WAS a stretch, but what's the point if you can't have any fun?

corkhead

(6,119 posts)
20. Wine is one of the most important things in my life
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 09:53 AM
Jan 2015

hence the moniker. I am even more anxious to read it to see how you did on that score


DFW

(54,369 posts)
23. I'd be interested to hear your opinion
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 10:32 AM
Jan 2015

I know I fooled at least one professional reviewer, but he was a book reviewer, not necessarily an oenologist, or whatever it is wine enthusiasts call themselves.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
31. In my fantsies, when my book is a hit film, here's the song I want to run during the closing credits
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 12:14 PM
Jan 2015


Actually, I had given the manuscript to a film producer here in NY last year, and figured she wasn't interested. I just ran into her cousin, and freaked out to hear that she "loved it!" and that I didn't respond to her email wanting further discussions because I had already signed with another studio (!!!!!).

What happened is that I never got her email! Stay tuned for the next exciting episode.........

panader0

(25,816 posts)
26. We have another author here too: nolabear
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 11:00 AM
Jan 2015

Her novel is 'The Last of the Pascagoula'
It's available on Amazon. Not to hijack your thread DFW, just to call attention to another DU writer.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
30. By all means!
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 12:08 PM
Jan 2015

There is some seriousl candlepower on DU and if we have other writers, I'm all for them getting recognition as well.

denbot

(9,899 posts)
35. Stan Lee commented no less, cool.
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 04:06 PM
Jan 2015

I downloaded it to my Kindle. I'm in the middle of Mistborne, so unless I sync to the Audio version,it might be a while till I get to The Time Cellar.

On edit; being from Texas, why did you base your character in my hometown (L.A.)?

DFW

(54,369 posts)
36. A couple of reasons for choosing L.A.
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 04:35 PM
Jan 2015

1.) The fact that there is a super ritzy area (Rodeo Drive) that is well-known almost everywhere.

2.) The fact that L.A. is better known for oddball characters--Dallas doesn't have a Hollywood or a Beverly Hills.

3.) The fact that the legend of Zorro was about Spanish California (too long to explain--you'll see when you get to the story).

4.) The fact that a local university is well-known for its film school--not so for any college local to me.

5.) The fact that the Las Vegas mafia is more likely to show up in L.A. than in Dallas (see comment #3).

6.) The ridiculous traffic situation in L.A. is more famous than Dallas traffic (again, see #3).

7.) The fact that a genius Guatemalan woman is more likely to have an ex from Hong Kong in L.A. than in Dallas

If THAT isn't enough to get you wondering WTF the book is about, I give up

DFW

(54,369 posts)
39. Thanks, and cheers!
Sun Jan 4, 2015, 09:55 PM
Jan 2015

I wrote, rather deliberately, from a distinctly American point of view and using "Yank" vernacular, but maybe it would connect in the UK to some extent. I haven't heard that anyone in the UK has read it yet.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
43. I hope I don't let you down
Mon Jan 5, 2015, 01:11 AM
Jan 2015

But let me have it with both barrels if I do. If I messed up, I won't get better if no one tells me what I did wrong.

DFW

(54,369 posts)
44. To all who are considering the Kindle version
Mon Jan 5, 2015, 09:47 AM
Jan 2015

The problem mentioned by the one guy who had problems was supposedly corrected (my office had originally downloaded it as a pdf file, and Kindle only takes Word). If there are other problems, someone please let me know!

DFW

(54,369 posts)
49. That's a relief!
Fri Feb 20, 2015, 02:46 AM
Feb 2015

No matter how many VIP plugs I get, it's always gratifying to hear that from "real mortals," who took a chance on pure spec.

If you get the time and want to bother, please put a comment on the Amazon site. I can always use the free PR!

Thanks!

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